Reviews for White Sands

BY : SailorPoison

  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2004

    It might work better if you wrote without the


    It makes it seem elementary. And it seems like you have some good ideas. Just a suggestion is all.

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  • From ANON - Jade Pheonix on December 28, 2003

    O.O Wow! *drools* Great! Want more!

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  • From SailorPoison on December 20, 2003

    I agree with you. I wrote one freaky story there. But heck it was worth it!

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  • From ANON - nicholai on November 08, 2003

    That's messed up.

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