Reviews for Joined Worlds

BY : SailorPoison


  • From ANON - Tifa Valentine on March 16, 2005

    Wow okay. Pretty long, slightly short fic but I loved most every bit of it!! Well except for the part of Tifa and Cloud... go figure, I'm not a Cloud Strife fan. But other than the fact of her telling him she'd marry him, it was a great fic. Ah, i was going to be so upset if you killed off Cid Highwind. Thank Shiva you didn't. Mmm, poor Vincent. He didn't have a very big role in this one but I can still be amused by reading about Laguna and Squall. Both I might add are so glomp-able ~winks~

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  • From ANON - Tifa Valentine on March 16, 2005

    Why that sorry lil snot...grrr dumb a$$ Cloud. Never did like that spiky headed jerk. And the nerve to hurt Vincent!!! Man, let me at that sorry basket case!! I'll rearrange his nuts and make a tossed salad from his tiny little cucumber!!!
    Sorry lol, ~coughs~

    ~continues to read on....~

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  • From ANON - Tifa Valentine on March 16, 2005

    Aww so sweet!! I'm lovin' the Zell & Yuffie part so much!! I must read more. So far this is a great fic!!!!

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  • From ANON - JaycenDark on December 07, 2003

    very good as useual!
    (sorry i suck at reviewing stories )

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  • From SailorPoison on December 07, 2003

    LOL

    My grammer has always been pathetic! Just suffer it or edit my stories for me. I admit I often was temped to find me an editer but I am too darn poor to pay for one. I won't go on present tense of past tense. I might get crude But I will mention the pairings.

    I am glad you voiced your opinion. As I stated in beginning, Yuffie did grow up some. Plus I thought the pairing would be wild. Not like I had them screwing like bunnies. I also like to play with the odd pairing. Like my story with Zack X Cid or Zack X Vincent. Yes, I know the ff7 Zack is dead.. but these are fanfics. Not to be taken too seroius . Okay back to topic.

    And many a fanfic Cid was married to Shera. At the end of the FF7 Cid made this sort speech about realizing he did care for Shera and that she was all he had. With the fact he was no longer bearing a hard grudge againts her it is not all that alien for them to have married. Cid was living with her for long time and just might of happened. But if you truly read my story, you would have noted Cid still expresses more love for his airship then his wife. I twill note that I don;t always have Cid married to Shera in my fanfics (exp: sometimes I pair him with Vincent! But that is perdictable pairing. )

    Now the Quistic Deception. I am well aware Quistis is blond and Shera is a brunette. But I am also aware that when you are going at very fast speeds and very busy like attacking something that fires back, you can see darnest things from corner of your eye. Thus even with blond hair, they just had to make Quistrs look close enough like Shera to make Cid distracted. Any other time, Cid would have not been fooled. This one time, he had to do a double take and that was long enough for them to shoot him down.

    I am do thank you for the objective review. I just wanted my two cents. ^.^


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  • From ANON - Lacey Parker on December 07, 2003

    First off, thank you for completing the stbefobefore posting it. Sadly, I think that's the only thing I can thank you for in this. Your grammar was atrocious. You left commas in the strangest places, and the verb tense changed so often I didn't know whether the story was past or present. Oh, wait, I was wrong. I chankhank you for not switching between first and third person. Your pairings aren't at all supported by anything other than fan speculation. Cloud may have had a crush on Tifa when they were kids, but it's pretty evident that faded. Zell and Yuffie would never work because they're too much alike, the same reason Zell and Selphie would never work. In fact, the only person I /can/ see Zell with from 7 is Vincent. Also, why would Cid and Shera be married? He can't stand her, and she only hangs around because she feels guilty about ruining his launch. Speaking of Shera, according to gameplay, she'unetunette, not blonde, so how could Quistis have been mistaken for her?
    And my final complaint for this story is that it shouldn't be here. It didn't deserve an R or NC-17 rating. At most, I'd give it PG-13. You even censored the swearing, for crying out loud!
    But please, don't think of this as a flame, more...constructive criticism.

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