Reviews for BoredBored Great Kami I'm Bored

BY : CrystallineTears


  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2014

    Learn to format for christ's sake

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  • From ANON - Sprink on November 10, 2005

    Might I suggest the services of a competent beta reader? Also, another play through of the game/watching of the movie to get a better grasp of what is in character and what is out of character.

    This would be an excellent stab at a first fic, however I would recommend taking to heart the adage of all writers: Show, don't tell.

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  • From ANON - Tasha on August 09, 2004

    The story is wonderful, but Tensing should be Tseng. Keep up the excellent work.

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  • From SailorPoison on February 22, 2004

    Ohhhhh Vincent came back!

    I wonder what will happen next?!

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  • From ANON - SailorPoison on February 04, 2004

    Awww.. ;.; that was a very sweet story.

    I am not the biggest reno and Vincent fan but nice how you set up this pairing.

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  • From ANON - DJ Link on January 26, 2004

    OH MY GOD, I love this story!!!!!! Your a better writer than me. Really, your a good writer. I'll read more of your work. It'll be fun. Say hi, to Sephy for me. *Huggs Steph* Bye E me me

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  • From ANON - Aerie on January 08, 2004

    BAHAHAHA! What an interesting pair they are! .....but somehow...it works! I really liked your second chapter when CLoud bet Reno....hahahah that was great! ^__^

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  • From SailorPoison on December 22, 2003

    Awwww poor vincent. Well at least he gets to go to a house and not a cheap inn. Hehehehehe

    I have no rrom as I put Cid into worse sexual situations.

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  • From ANON - Amber on December 21, 2003

    ((Yes I am SailorPoison ))


    LOL Poor Vincent! But I bet Reno is great in bed. Hehehehehe

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  • From ANON - Amber on December 21, 2003

    Ended it there?! I wanna see what happens next! It was just getting good too.

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  • From on December 17, 2003

    yes sir! *giggles*
    good start, has potiental.
    My better half told me to read. She likes it too. When are you going to update?
    Send us an email when you do please?

    C~ya

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