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Reviews for Summer in Garden

By : Yorda
  • From ANON - FigmentedReality on August 22, 2006
    Nice story you got here. The plot is enfolding nicely so far. But the last chapter was sort of empty. You should've made it longer with more detail. Like interaction between the two. But I felt a little more whole when you talked about Seifer's romantic feelings. Good job so far!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 19, 2004
    you tease. But I like your writing I am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - jd-ayane on May 15, 2004
    Waaai! *_* Squall and Seifer are NEARLY alone in the Garden (if you donīt think about Cid and the other staff)... Wooohaaa! XD But Squall still have a problem with Seiferīs attitude (who wouldnīt?). You Hto bto bring them together but not too fast! XD Let Seifer somehow really hurt Squall (forget the game, Ulmecia never appeared, create another story! XD) so that he realise what a bastard he was... so that he can be tortured with his own thoughts of blame and take care of the cute Squall-kun. *_*

    Baka me, Iīm somewhat sadistic today... =____= But Squall HAVE to realise that Seifer isnīt as bad as he acts...
    What Iīm blabbering about? O_o Who cares!

    Great fic, anyway! *_*
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  • From ANON - SexySiriusBlack on March 15, 2004
    Please continue!!! I love this pairing and I love Final FAntasy 8!!! It's my favorite!!! The storyline was better than any of the other games'. Yay!!! Bye! Wheeeeeeeeeee!!!
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  • From IsanDraconia on March 13, 2004
    more please!! Love the plot!! Can't wait for the whole thing to come together....:P
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  • From ANON - Starboy on March 09, 2004
    I like it so far but I cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - SexySiriusBlack on March 09, 2004
    Well...this is good. Do you have a beta? If you don't, then you're very good with grammar and all that stuff. I like it. I'm actually excited to find out what happens. I liked the part especially when Quistis looked hurt when Squall flinched away from her...very nice. Okay...I don't really have any constructive criticism other than to update soon. Maybe I'll come up with something in further chapters! Bye!
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