Reviews for Deep end

BY : Purplepenguin


  • From Smailii1805 on December 06, 2008

    This was confusing ... VERY confusing. You just jumped from one scene to another, leaving empty spots in between and the readers behind. I have no idea AT ALL how much time has gone by and how the scenes fit together; or what the characters think in some situations, for that matter. Redo this, seriously. Its a nice idea, but it needs editing, badly...

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  • From ANON - Cleric on May 30, 2005

    Very long, which is good, but it had an abrupt ending. It also had T O N S of spelling mistakes. Other than that, it was awesome. Very realistic!

    5/5

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  • From ANON - lonelywolf on January 13, 2005

    One of the best stories i've ever read. an excellent job. Well done.

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  • From ANON - Shortone on August 11, 2004

    I've only read the first part so far but it sounds really good. Great descriptions! Oh, and FF.net is too limited, I'm glad you posted here instead.

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  • From ANON - Red Death on August 06, 2004

    YA! I love this story. I don't normally read AUs but I liked this one. SquallxSeifer is best pairing in the world! lol! SEX!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2004

    Cute story, but this needs some *serious* editing. The povs are completely messed up. Did you read this before posting? I think you should.

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