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Reviews for Little Shaver

By : SmittyK
  • From ANON - Chandraken (not logged in) on October 12, 2004
    Tsk tsk tsk. Is Zax never horny??? LMAO thoughthinthink this chapter was better then last coz you included more of how Cloud was feelin even if it was a little OOC. makes the story deeper instead of just horny! And remember about the *ahem?* here's the line in Chapter 2 "Zax's waist so that the boy's pale ass cheeks could rest on the giant, furry rod that was Zax's penis"

    I can see why ya want to change it! I found that male writers have a particular wriitting style compared to girls. They write quickly into lemons and use different descriptions to females. I'm ramblin aren't I? Soz! ^_^

    Keep up da good work!

    Chandraken
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  • From vivilover69 on October 09, 2004
    SQUEAL! ^^ I am sooo happy you added me to your recommended reading...you are so great!

    And by the way, I sort of majored in humor, talking shit to my teachers all the time...I got detentions like every day for some stupid crack I made.
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  • From ANON - vivilover69 on October 09, 2004
    Hey, Smitty! Love yer work...have you considered doing a Vivi/Cloud? That might be interesting...XD And I just read your profile...bisexual and looking? Hell yeah! I'm looking too...and I love a man who's not afraid to get down with another one. ^^

    C'ya later!

    VVL 69
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