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Reviews for Sudden Darkness

By : Yorda
  • From DragonellDeatheye on October 02, 2008
    wow read it allnd loved it, hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - Ta Boo on December 15, 2006
    *continued*

    Squall was way too caring (even if he DID love Seifer. And he talked way too much - this IS Squall afterall. It took Rinoa forever to get him to talk about his feelings, so I doubt he'd just start talking normally in a few minutes.
    And Seifer acted terribly immature, and nothing like the strong, confident, masculine guy we saw in FF8 (and blindness is hardly an excuse for a total change in personality).

    The fic was also rather rushed. You need to add more description in your scenes.


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  • From ANON - Ta Boo on December 15, 2006
    I'm sorry to say this, but I didn't really like this story. The idea of Seifer being blind is brilliant, and I was interested in finding out how Squall would react to his rival's blindness, Seifer's reaction to losing his eyesight, and then the Garden's reaction to the school bully suddenly going blind.
    But instead you just rushed into the yaoi (and wrote that Squall and Seifer loved each other out-of-the-blue, with no real reasoning behind it). And there was alot of OOCness.
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on September 02, 2006
    Neeh, when's the next chapter coming out, if ever? I want to read mooore!
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  • From ANON - leviathan06 on August 06, 2005
    "Mmmh...flowers..uhh..I want a cookie too.." Seifer was mumbling, his eyes closed. " This part really made me laugh. I really can't picture Seifer saying that. *laughs*
    Liking the fic so far.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    omg I love this story I hope you update it soon
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  • From ANON - Clam on November 04, 2003
    I really liked this story! Some of the cast were a *little* out of character, but I really didn't mind. It was just too cute and fluffy! I love the way you described their emotions, and especially considering this was your first fic, it thought it was great. I hope to read more of your work soon!
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  • From ANON - Mya on July 10, 2003
    This is sssooo good you must keep writing if you can. Love the story.
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  • From ANON - Rico on July 07, 2003
    Ahhh yet another great wonderful chapter. Really sweet!! I hope you put the next one up soon!! Waiting for your great story continuations always kills me ya know. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Wolf on July 06, 2003
    Yay,haha!That was a good chapter.=)!!!Continue!
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  • From ANON - Mya on July 05, 2003
    This is so good. It is so sweet please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on June 28, 2003
    That was great! I'm so glad he can see Squall smile! I'm a sap I know, please I hope this is not the end, update soon, Thank You Very Much ;)
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  • From ANON - Wolf on June 28, 2003
    Yay!I've been waiting so long to find out if he does get his sight back.And he does.=)What a great chapter.Continue!
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  • From ANON - Mya on June 22, 2003
    This was so good you must continue writing. I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - Bel on June 20, 2003
    Ahh this is just such a great story!! Please continue it soon. I like the way everything flows, really excellent. Nice amount of description, not draggy at all yet describing everything with enough length. I really like the way this is coming on and could kill just to read the next few chapters soon. Great work!! ^_^
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