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Reviews for I Love You...I'll Kill You Songfic

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Benigirl on September 11, 2005
    Wow!! I am impressed with the lines you wrote referring to each line of the song. The line I liked best is "Hard flesh slipping deep to fill the emptiness that only leaves when he’s inside me" Good work!!


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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on September 07, 2005
    Well now, you are entirely entitled to your opinions. That's what reviews are for. Yes, I do feel your assessment is quite harsh, but again, it is your opinion. It wasn't a "shallow attempt at adding some lyricism to your prose". I simply felt these were the appropriate words to use with the feel of the music (and lyrics). I write for my own pleasure and, of course that of my readers. Should they not like something I've written, they are free to say so just as you have.

    I'm not sure what you expected to find when you read my fics. They are mostly to entertain. They amuse me and a good number of others. I fully realize that I cannot please everybody and I make no attempt to. I pleased myself and darksquall (who the fic was written for) and basically, as self-centered as that sounds, that is all that matters to me with regards to this fic. I'm very happy that others found this and my other fics enjoyable. A shame it wasn't an enjoyable experience for you. I do appreciate your honesty though.
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  • From ANON - JR on September 06, 2005
    You were pointed out to me by a friend, and I’m really unsure as to why. I’ve read a few of your fics to be certain my assessment is fair, and, harsh as this may sound, your writing is cold. It’s as if you put so much effort into sounding like a ‘worthy’ writer that you’ve totally neglected to include any feeling.

    Where’s the style and the verve? I’d never be able to identify an ‘Iron Dog Story’ in a line-up. There’s nothing to really engage with; for all the emotion on display in many of your fics, you may as well simply be posting lists of words.

    I’ve chosen this particular story to post this review to because, quite frankly, it smacks of laziness. You’ve just slapped a couple of passionless sentences between the words of the song. That’s not writing. I’d be surprised if this took you more than 15 minutes.

    As well, this displays what would be your trademark - the shallow attempt at adding some lyricism to your prose. I went through a phase of writing like that in secondary school, after reading some of the classics in my English classes and attempting to sound as poetic as they did, but without the richness and depth.

    It seems as if you’re trying to be literate and artistic, rather than actually being either. The result feels contrived and cynically hollow. Again, there's no feeling and no passion.

    You may think this is overly critical; after all, it’s just fan fiction. It’s there for cheap fun and writing practice. But the fan fiction system is built on a network of friendships and mutual praise. It’s not conducive to honesty, and I think it’s needed. If this is practice, then people need to know how to improve.
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  • From ANON - leannan on July 01, 2005
    Beautiful and quite unique I must admit. This fic was a breath of fresh life into the fandom. You illustrated their love/hate relationship uniquely, but nonetheless effectively. I love it... sequel, only if you feel it fits. You have my support with either decision.
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  • From ANON - vortus-the-undying on June 29, 2005
    Holy crap!!!! I never expected anyone else to like the same song from the same group as me. I'm glad you put it in as a love story and it made the story sound so good. My hat is off to you, please continue your excellent writing.
    ~Vortus The Undying
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  • From ANON - Artemis on June 19, 2005
    Aw, that is so sad... But at the same time that is so fluffily cute... I have no idea what I'm trying to say...
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 17, 2005
    I TOTALY LOVE YOUR STYLE, TOTALY LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE... I TRULY FOUND THIS FIC REALLY LEFT ME HOT, AND I TOTALY CAN'T WAIT FOR YA TO UPDATE THIS FIC...I WILL BE WAITING, SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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