Reviews for Stay With Me

BY : UmbraAdvena


  • From ANON - ami on August 25, 2006

    nice story. the only problem is that

    the past tense for "drag" is NOT "drug" It's "dragged" okay?

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  • From ANON - Luca on January 16, 2006

    Lol, that was good! Real funny! Update soon!

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  • From ANON - queenadreena on January 06, 2006

    Although I would've liked a bit more from a first chapter, it's not that bad. You write well and I didn't spot any spelling mistakes. Would like to read more soon, so please update?

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  • From ANON - Eoko on January 02, 2006

    Ah. -giggles at the wonderful clicheness- Gotta love those little falling down moments that just happen to land a prospective couple in an awkard position. This is amusing. In fact, the trio for the mission is exactly one I would have picked. Very good indeed. I applaud the chapter and look forward to more in the future.

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  • From ANON - vangel on January 01, 2006

    Oh wow, I'm looking forward to this!

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  • From Blythe on January 01, 2006

    Good start. Well written. Good characterization without spending too much time on exposition. Looking forward to reading more!

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  • From ANON - Last of the Luna Moombas on December 31, 2005

    Looking interesting so far can't wait to read more.

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