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Reviews for Living with Heart

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - dracoqueen22 on July 19, 2006
    More, please!!! I rather enjoy this story and angst is like chocolate to me! I want to know what happens so update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on July 18, 2006
    Cid better hope I never come across him or I'll kick him in the teeth. If he wants Squall back so bad, the LEAST he could do is have the balls to go get him himself. If Squall's THAT important to the financial health of Balamb Garden, then leaving the place to reaquire such an asset would not be irresponsible. Stupid dickhead.

    And Squall . . . As far as him 'not needing' family . . . Well, they always say you don't know what you have 'til it's gone, which could easily be altered to explain his 'change in behavior': He didn't know what he was missing until he found it.

    As for Laguna--if he doesn't like to lie then he better start thinking up some half-truths that simply carry omissions of key facts or he's going to blurt something out accidentally.


    ~LS
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  • From ANON - aya on July 18, 2006
    have you ever thought of writing a real book? You've got an amazing talent. You carefully look over every little thing and figure out how to make it fit perfectly. Your characters are deep and fascinating, and your storylines are addictive (I think it might be easier to quit smoking haha).
    I can't wait till you can update again! I missed reading your stories when my internet died. Thank you for writing this! Also, I'm probably gonna be up for another 2 hours thinking of all the possibilities of what could happen.
    I
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2006
    You know, I was wondering what Quistis was going to do. It seemed so wrong for her to go to either of the extremes of completely following Cid's orders or blindly, absolutly supporting Squall, so I really like the way you handled her reaction here. Thanks to Cid's order for her to return so he can send someone less emotionally involved, she has an out so she can stay with SeeD yet still try to keep her loyalty to Squall intact. Very nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - Brittny on July 17, 2006
    Wow, I'd never thought I'd see the day where I'm reading a Laguna x Squall
    pairing... but it was worth reading! Nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 10, 2006
    Wow.

    Now I'm glad I decided to read this. I usually stay away from parent/child incest, but your summary caught my eye. I really like it. Good plot, well-written sex, it all works. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on July 09, 2006
    I love this story - stumbled across it by chance and decided to read because I know your writing from "Protecting the Lion" and "Strings Attached". Damn, I love Laguna/Squall, it's my favourite pairing, beating out even Seifer/Squall as favourite.

    The abusive background Squall has in this is rather sad, Laguna is just what he needs. I'll definately be waiting to see what happens when it gets back to Cid that Squall's not coming back.

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2006
    You're so good at keeping the characters in character!
    I liked the chapter, it had angst and a little bit of fluff...I think...wellwhatever the cuddling is considered...
    Anyways update soon! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - dracoqueen22 on July 02, 2006
    A great chapter as always. I admit I'm jealous of your writing.

    I can understand Laguna's conflicting emotions. And Kiros is being remarkably understanding though I was surprised by his initial reaction. I expected him to start yelling, not really grab Squall and bodily haul him away. But looking back, it makes sense.

    You are keeping everyone in character and that I am enjoying. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2006
    It's been a while since I've reviewed...wow this has just gotten better and better! I love it!
    Hmm...to include or not to include the scene...it's your choice really.
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Nel on July 01, 2006
    I love it! Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2006
    woah.. I just realized, you're the same person who writes protecting the lion! That's probably why I like this one so much.
    I'm so happy you're fucked up like me :D I'd love to see more lagunaXsquall stories from you, you write beautifully
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  • From ANON - aya on June 30, 2006

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  • From ANON - dracoqueen22 on June 30, 2006
    The perfect mix of smut and angst, I love it.
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  • From ANON - kikvws on June 26, 2006
    *annoying fangirl squeal* Oh, this is excellent, too. I like where you're going with the darker side of Squall, and I really like your spin on his personality. Him trying to please everyone...that so fits! And I am most definitely not squicked by some Laguna on Squall action...mmmm. More please!
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