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Reviews for Nothing to Do

By : onicchi
  • From Darknessdawns on August 06, 2012
    This is definitely one of my favorite Bal/Pen Lemons. Its very well written and highly enjoyable. In short, you did a wonderful job with it.
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  • From Darknessdawns on October 11, 2008
    That was fantastic, simply fantastic. It was well written, the grammer was perfect, and it was very enjoyable. I think you did a wonderful job. The characters were also portraid wonderfully. I especially like how you ended it with a mention of Balthier trying to convince himself of his feelings(or lack of) for Penelo.
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  • From trucrystal on March 23, 2008
    Nice, I loved it! :D
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  • From GhostStories on September 17, 2007
    and here I had pretty much given up on finding a Balthier/Penelo fic! So what is this, like, the only one? Well at least its a good story. It seems like it was meant to have more chapters but it doesn't. No plans to continue? Thats too bad. Nice work- very sexy!
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  • From KiaraExodus on June 03, 2007
    Beautifully written. A nice piece, a nice pairing. I didn't actually imagine Balthier & Penelo before reading. More please? :P
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  • From onevote on April 16, 2007
    Well, a bit late for me to review,but in my opinion, it was one of the best stories of this topic(FFXII) I have come across in my endless venture of this abyssal plain we call the internet. Although it lacked a strong plotline, the way it was written gave the illusion of an interesting series of events leading up to the main scene. So, basically, we got the goods, but without the work.
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  • From ANON - Blue Cloud on January 13, 2007
    Ricky is, as ever, the fool.
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  • From Jyet on January 09, 2007
    Very nice fic, manages to nail Balthier's character perfectly and Penelo's pretty well. I'd love to see these two paired up again, either in a direct sequel or an unrelated fic, as I haven't really seen the pairing anywhere else and you do it quite well. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - S on January 04, 2007
    Beautiful. You kept Balthier delightfully in-character, and I'm afraid that I'd love to see more. xD
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  • From ANON - Ricky on December 31, 2006
    Typical generic smut. Very boring.
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  • From ANON - Madj on December 29, 2006
    Here from the B/P Fairytale site. I really enjoyed this story. You don't find a lot of Balthier/Penelo fics out there, and this is one of my faves so far. I'd love to see a sequel or a continuation, since it seems to me that Balthier is going to have to deal with the shortcomings in his rules. I'd love to see him lose control of himself and the situation. But, anyway, nice job!
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  • From ANON - Kimisan on December 14, 2006
    I just got done with the game and I must say you did a damn good job of Balthier! Excellent! I give you snaps! Can't wait for the next chapter, Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Archica on December 13, 2006
    Oh wow, this story is really great. Very intense. It's wonderful to see Balthier/Penelo lemons. And judging from the date on your story, it's certainly one of the first B/P stories to emerge on the net. Good job! I was also wondering if you would allow me to post this story on my Balthier/Penelo shrine (not sure if aff.net allows you to post url's in reviews, but I'll try): http://one-sky.org/fairytale I would of course give you full credit. If I have your permission, please e-mail me to let me know. If not, I completely understand. :D Either way, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Blue Cloud on December 03, 2006
    Far better than the wannabe MSTer gives it credit for (that's some of the lamest riffing I've ever seen, by the way). A few grammatical bumps here and there, but the readability and enthusiasm completely make up for them. Fine story- one of the few instances where smut actually makes sense to me.
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  • From ANON - Tux on December 03, 2006
    http://tux-aka-joseph.livejournal.com/187787.html

    That's my review on the matter.
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