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Reviews for Lost in Snow (with pic)

By : ricobanderas9
  • From UzumakiIno on June 05, 2007
    Wonderful story! Don't mind all the people who say you rushed things--this fic couldn't last forever, and making it short and sweet was perfect. Keep up the good work!
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  • From UzumakiIno on June 05, 2007
    Mmmmm...lesbians...Great story, and the pic is pretty good too!
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  • From UzumakiIno on June 04, 2007
    I remember Snow--annoying boss fight against a sexy ice queen, all for the sake of Alexander's Summon Materia. Great story!
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  • From hfreak on April 09, 2007
    Love the fic. I've always though there would be an interesting potential with Snow and/or her lookalikes. I think you did an incredible job with this. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA Format) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!
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  • From ANON - skunko on January 09, 2007
    just...wow
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    Oh yeah and after reading the other reviews, yes, more sex would be great, although its great to have you putting effort into the actual story and process of the seduction, too.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    Your FF mind control stories are AWESOME! I would love to see one made for FF Tactics, some woman Thief using her charm ability on Agrias or Rafa (or better yet, both). Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on January 01, 2007
    ^^Thanks for the review! Appreciate the comments- when I initially wrote it I didn't plan on having as much emphasis on the sex (in my first draft there were about three sentences). Most of my motivation was to have the power struggle and center on the use of the monster's abilities, since those I don't see in other fics. I'll keep my ears open for other feedback, and if the people want sex, I'll give them sex.

    ...not to be interpreted literally, of course!

    -RB9
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  • From ANON - Schatten on January 01, 2007
    Overall, I thought it was decent, in which it was good in the first chapter as it was building up. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter in its entirety, although honestly I was hoping for more sex. Same thing in the second chapter, though it began to feel rushed, especially in the third chapter. You did good drawing out the exposition, but it begins to feel rushed and short on what was most important in the final chapter, the sex. Had it been longer and more detail was put in that particular area, it would have been better. I still liked it, though, and the situation itself I found to be very interesting and in the end, erotic, and the story did it's goal.
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