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Reviews for A Lamia's Tail

By : ricobanderas9
  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2009
    Been going over your old stuff. Short but one of your hottest. Got me hooked on the idea of lamias!
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  • From animekid on December 12, 2007
    whoa crappytastic hotgoodness.....

    *shakes head*

    still that was so damn original; I actually play FF4 and didn't consider this XD

    I love you writing style as well as your innotative input on the FF scene

    goodness make more! If you make anything with Shadow from FF6 or FFT (besides the other FFT fic that you made,) I'll literally go back and replay the games.

    this is up there with some of my favorites.
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  • From Streti on November 22, 2007
    Hmm. It was interesting, but I agree with the previous notes about Cecil's character, so the "corruption" didn't quite come through. Didn't she make him waste any of his seed on her bountiful breasts?
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  • From touchstone85 on January 31, 2007
    Pretty cool stuff. I'm really into MC. Could you write one about FFTactics? Celia and Lede had a Charm type ability, if I'm not mistaken. Can't remember what it was called though. You could make it work on Ramza or Orlandu at that mission right before they were going to fight Marquis Olmdor.
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on January 11, 2007
    ^Odd. Any other comments Citan, shoot me an e-mail, my name @gmail.com. This high review count is giving me delusions of popularity.
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  • From ANON - Citan on January 10, 2007
    Yeah, I do, but I keep the name I write under a secret usually. Sorry.
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  • From ANON - slutty mc slut slut on January 10, 2007
    wow very descriptive never knew thats what happened to a guy(refering to this)
    Every time her hands pumped the tip of his penis, the sides sent a shockwave down into the base of his sex and up his spine into his brain.

    Preaty dam nice now i know why guys say there head hurts after a hand/blow job.
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on January 10, 2007
    ^Thanks for comments, yar. From a literary standpoint I feel that all of this is a bit far-fetched when you look at character profiles. I'm a big Cecil fan myself, but in-game, he can get hit by charm magic too, which is my focus. A non-charm-induction would definitely need to be pretty elaborate. Do you write too, Citan?
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  • From ANON - Badass Freaking Overlord on January 10, 2007
    This was cool, I love lamias/nagas/liliths/whatever, they're super sexy. I hope you do more fics like this with them! If you need any ideas, I remember there was some mission in FF Tactics Advance that had some lamia queen or something that was causing problems for people in a town...you could have Ritz and/or Shara go to stop her and become entranced, seduced, and enslaved.
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  • From ANON - Citan on January 10, 2007
    The trick to picking an attractive target and writing them realistically is not to underestimate his/her abilities. Cecil's devotion makes him an attractive target, but the game shows several times that he's beyond corruption, even when in the midst of darkness. If his own dark job and Golbez/Zemus's attempts can't sway him from his heroic nature, nothing can. You should go for characters who have incredible devotion and purity, but aren't actively shown to be impossible to corrupt--which is why your Lost in Snow is definitely your best, because Tifa is the perfect example of someone who has an immensely strong will and devotion, but nonetheless can stray from it, even if just slightly.
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on January 10, 2007
    ^^ I'm glad it was well received. As noted in my little top-note, this was meant to satisfy a more narrow crowd, so I'm happy if it's enjoyable for others. Actually, I had the Lamia idea before- some posters from the collective wanted to see Lamia stuff, so the other commenter wasn't the first. It's funny though, I think Cecil's goodness makes him a more attractive target for brainwashing. Thanks for your guy's reviews... if there are any pairings you'd like to see and if I have some time I'd be happy to write more.
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  • From ANON - Citan Uzuki on January 09, 2007
    Eh, not bad, but it could have been a lot better. Cecil's an unrealistic target, too good and uncorruptible by evil for this fic to seem at all serious. One of the other characters, like Rosa or Rydia or Kain, would've been a lot better. And the request had asked for a lamia seducing an FF woman, anyway. But it's not bad, and it was nice of you to actually do a request fic for some random person. I hope they're properly grateful for it and don't whine about it being a guy instead of a girl.
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  • From TheSky on January 09, 2007
    Love it. It's be great if you did more. Maybe about 9 or 10.
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