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Reviews for A Womanizing Bite from Lani

By : ricobanderas9
  • From crimsiden on April 23, 2011
    I have to say you got some talent on the real . I have read pretty much all of your fanfics and each have left me impressed, but anyhow let me get
    to the point . This one I felt was rushed to be honest, within the first couple of seconds he was owned, not even a moment of resistance. Thats about my only compliant . At first i didn't pay it any mind due to the nature of this site, but after reading your other fanfics then reading this one , this one seemed a bit more unrealistic and less creative then the others. Like mistress of ruin was brilliant, the snow one was brilliant, this one just seems a bit rushed ? Other then the beginning the rest was solid you painted a very good picture of how poor zidane was victimize, and nailed seduction down just as well as you usually do . Overall great job :p Wish there were more writers on this site like you .
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  • From bootysweat27 on October 26, 2007
    I've read pretty much all of your fics with very few exceptions and then I decided that maybe it would be nice if I reviewed to them. Being the selectively lazy person I am, I decided I'd only review one and decided that this one was my absolute favorite.

    I'm a big fan of the character used, but that's only the tip of the iceberg here. You have a real mastery of your selected genre of smut and you've mastered the written language enough such that the presentation was also of very high quality. It's nice to find something written by somebody who doesn't feel that smut is just as good without quality presentation as with.

    Nice job and I'll probably be talking to you on occasion in the future.

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  • From makuta15 on June 16, 2007
    This is some awesome stuff! I'd like to see more like it, but I feel that the victim should be completely transformed, in body as well as in mind.
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