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Reviews for Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos

By : LadyVorlana
  • From vivarose on July 30, 2008
    There's always that one character that is maddening difficult to work with, I feel your pain there. A nice chapter, I do so enjoy how you can portray Sin's mental state, very nice!
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  • From SapphireEyes on July 29, 2008
    ....oh for fucking SOMETHINE with a emr on high. It did it again. D: It was A GOOD REVEIW TOOO!!!!

    Mehhh *Cries and tackles Reno, refusing to let go* I will miss my little furry ball with wings D: *sniffle*

    *giggles alittle, ignoring the hands trying to push me away* hehe Cloud you puss. Suck it up man.

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  • From SapphireEyes on July 29, 2008
    wahhhhhh Sinnnn
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  • From SapphireEyes on July 29, 2008
    *Cusses profoundly as little zaps shoot through body" ******* ****! *flops down on my butt, feeling as if I just got hit with Reno's EMR and quickly recast's shell,protect, and reflect. Swallows down a potion before shaking the oil off.* Mehhh....cheap shot. -cracks neck and rolls shoulders- Thats it...-grips clip tightly, spinning pistol before cocking it- IT.IS.ON! Sorry frizzy, but your sweet old mr.cocky is getting a butt whoopin'! And I ain't holden back, even if I have to bite and claw! *Growls before leaping at army, weapons posed and spell at the ready*

    To Be Continued....
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  • From ANON - MR COCKY on July 29, 2008
    *MR COCKY giggles with glee as the robo ponies back up* "you did a good job of exploding an empty bottle" *the robo ponies reposition themselves as MR COCKY casts dispel* "ready, aim, fire!" *the robo ponies lift their tails and emit a now electrified barrage of caster oil onto sapphire as a now terrified marshmallow snake squeezes asota tighter* "well I am glad the lack of training for the snake is paying off. dont worry little girl, I can easily replace the ponies fur"
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  • From SapphireEyes on July 29, 2008
    *stares at the attack with both an amused and bored looks, rolling the bottle of oil around will my foot* I never run from a battle -grins evilly- *Rolls bottle one last time before swiftly catching my boot under it and hurling the object at the army before casting fire spell on the simple oil. The bottle explodes, creating a small enough boom to knock the attackers away from the shield. While they are down, throws out a stronger fira attack, followed by thundera* -le sign- This will get us no where in the end Mr.Cocky. I could do this for hours. *Twirls paperclip around, reaching down to pull a silenced pistol from my boot, snapping in 6 rounds of explosive mercury tipped rounds* But attack some more if you must C:
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  • From ANON - MR COCKY on July 29, 2008
    *watching sapphire with glee as the robo kitties start to attack the magical shield, robo ponies surround saphire and face away from her* "they have been modified to resist emp electric and water attacks, though the feline portion of my army will have a amusing reaction to water. then again your shield will only last so long" *Mr cocky tosses a large bottle of caster oil at sapphire's feet* "you might want to run now" *confused, the marshmallow snake just cuddles asota, covering her eyes
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  • From ANON - AnimeFanGrrl-4-Life on July 28, 2008
    AAARRRGGG!!! Post soon, please!!

    Fan-of-u-4-life
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  • From Kiheki on July 28, 2008
    @@....I hope Chaos tells Vincent to clean his gun REALLY well......

    This story intrigues me, I do hope you update soon!
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  • From Kuragari75 on July 24, 2008
    I gotta admit... Chaos has... what's the word to use here.. style? I dunno but I like it! curious to see what Sin's up to and don't worry, writer's block and internet failure suck and I'm always happy to wait as long as it takes for the next chapter... you still update faster than almost everyone I read on this site! ^^ good to see you again can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From vivarose on July 23, 2008
    Heh. evil glee, and a delicious vengeance thus far, i'm intrigued by Sin's mental movements. this will be most interesting :D
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 23, 2008
    Ohhh nasty Sin. Loved the end bit, just what the bastard deserves. Can't to read more.
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  • From SapphireEyes on July 23, 2008
    *eyes the marshmallow fiend warily as it glomps asota, keeping an eye on the army of soon to be scrap metal* hmmm I wonder if there's a microwave big enough to stuff that snake in...*readies paperclip and casts Protect on self, readying my watera and thundra spells while firaga for back up* -evil grin- Attack if you dare!!! MWAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - AnimeFanGrrl-4-Life on July 22, 2008
    Geh! Seph got what he deserved. I hope there's more. As always waiting for your next chapter doesn't disappoint. UPDATE SOON! FanGrrl wants more of Sephy torture! Painfully waiting for the next chapter :P

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  • From ANON - MR COCKY on July 22, 2008
    *grins innocently distracting Frizzy as 7 robo ponies 5 robo kitties and one marshmallow colored snake surround asota and sapph making strange noises* "Meow honey"*wile secretly signaling army to attack all at once they pounce
    marshmallow snake glomps asota first
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