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Reviews for Redemption

By : suixcausa
  • From ANON - Ann on September 20, 2011
    Omgness I was super excited when I saw that you updated this story! I'm glad that Angeal isn't as aggressive against Cloud in this chapter. I really hope Cloud actually tries to talk to Angeal and trust him over time. I wonder if there will be steamy scenes hmmm? ;) Anyways I'm glad that you're working on this story and I hope to get more soon!
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  • From ANON - Lyron713 on September 19, 2011
    alright, alright, i'll bloody review already. love the story and the plot, your characterizations are really good. keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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  • From Mort on September 18, 2011
    I feel sad for cloud having lost everyone- But, I rejoice a little that he is getting to share more time with Zack, I can appreciate the brain on Angeal- Even in the fact he realizes when to back off- This a excellent AU- i am looking forward to the next chapter-
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  • From ANON - tea on September 17, 2011
    I know I've reviewed this before, at least once, but I just wanted to review again to say.. I LOVE you for this. I greatly enjoy the interaction between Angeal and Cloud.. it's not something I would think would be easy to write, especially in their current situation. It's so strained, and yet has so many wonderful undercurrents. I love your Zack.. actually, I love all of your portrayals. And I don't care if it takes you another 20 years to finish writing this... I'll still be reading it!
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  • From ANON - Graver's Paradise on September 17, 2011
    Hi,
    I just found your story and i really like it. That was a really evil cliff hanger. Hope you update soon.
    Thank you for writing,
    Graver's Paradise
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  • From ANON - Tora on September 14, 2011
    MOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Silvershi on September 12, 2011
    This story is starting to get good. It's given me a few ideas for my own fanfic. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters... Might rewrite my plot....
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  • From ANON - Shasta on September 12, 2011
    This story is amazing. Worth the wait for sure. I love th way you portray the characters. Great job keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami-chan on August 02, 2011
    This story is awesome!!! Please tell me you are almost done with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Caffine High on July 05, 2011
    Please, please tell me your going to update soon! This is a great story so far :)
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  • From ANON - fataltea on June 17, 2011
    PLEASE.. for the love of all that's sexy.. do not stop writing this story. T__________T

    I've been following it for ages and ages, and I don't care if it takes you another 10 years.. as long as you don't stop writing till it's done. I must.. have.. another chapter.

    In all seriousness.. I love your Cloud. Hell, I love your Zack and Angeal too, but your Cloud is just incredible. And the story so far has me craving more. :3
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  • From ANON - cewo on April 23, 2011
    Well, I have tried to be patient as you did warn us you rarely update, but I thought maybe a nudge? Seriously, I check here everyday, hoping for a continuation to this fantastic story; it is, without a doubt, my favorite FF7 story ever! Please give us more soon!
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  • From ANON - tookkia on March 15, 2011
    Hello,

    Congrats on a ridiculously intriguing story. I will admit its an idea that's been done frequently, however this makes your success all the more fruitful. There are so many good things going on, among them the spot on characterizations and character dynamics between Zack, Cloud, and Angeal. Cloud, in particular, is such a difficult character to write, and yet you do it so well! For instance, his utter bewilderment when Zack kisses him the first time: very good and believable, because how else would a too serious-too-mature-broken-by-loss teenager (but not a teenager) react to something as foreign as pleasure? I also like how you bridge this strange happening to Clouds sexual preference, in that he isn't even aware of one. You do an amazing job of also syncing fifteen year old Cloud with past Cloud. What I mean by this is that despite his horrid past experiences, vast knowlege, etc, Cloud still retains certain traits and tendencies his shy self had before (and might have not had so much in the future). Like how he's still so easily flustered. Don't we all love a blushing Cloud?

    Zack is often written as over the top bouncy and airheaded, so I appreciate the lack of in your story. And of course, being the perverted fangirl that I am, I adore the fact that he's still so horny lol. Angeal, as much as I'm disliking him right now, is behaving as a real-life scenario would expect him to behave. I wonder how upset the Planet would be if Cloud just told them the truth...

    I'm an avid Zack and Cloud fan so this last chapter left my eye twitching. I do hope you'll have them together soon, and I don't just mean physically (though of course I'm looking forward to that too ;)

    Not to mention your writing itself ;) You write really well. I've been reading fanfiction for almost a year and there's only a few types of 'good writing' that I've encountered. Yours is the entertaining type, which in my opinion is the best kind. I'm eager for more.

    Btw, this is the first story on adult fanfiction that I've ever reviewed. You officially devirginized me in that.

    Looking forward to more.

    Tookkia
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  • From Iyasu on January 15, 2011
    Awesome fic! There's infinite complications for Cloud, and he's not even close to finishing the mission that the Planet set out for him. Wonderful plot development. I don't see fics this awesome that last so long. Thanks! I just feel so bad for Cloud, every time he gets a break, something comes crashing down on him. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Nex on January 14, 2011
    Brilliant! Wish it would update more frequently *-*
    You used the paragraph about cloud's and zack's strengths almost exactly as it was in a previous chapter so i was a bit put off there, but otherwise it's very well written and i really look forward to reading more!
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