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Reviews for Fire-Cross Knight

By : somadrop
  • From ANON - asialisek on September 29, 2013
    Poo.... was looking forward, via route of a thought out plot and character-building, to see how you would bring Seifer and Squall closer together.... and then your last note. :( I mean, it's your story, and so far well written and interesting. The idea is really kewl! But I can't really read any other pairings from this fandom, so it makes me double sad to have found a new story only to have unexpected casting changes. *sad* I hope you continue it though, wherever it may lead --- but if you'd be so kind as to change the summary/pairing category. I feel a teensy bit like a fly lured into a juicy web of no SxS. Best regards,
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  • From asialisek on June 17, 2009
    13. Explanation

    @_________@ No SeiferxSquall????????? **wobbly bottom lip**

    *sigh*
    *si~~~~~~~~~gh* Poop. So hard to find new SxS stories, well written, plot driven, when you've (me) read almost everything out there already. waaaaaaah.. poooooooop.. I was so excited for this! But I totally understand when Plot takes a swing to the left when u were expecting a right. *hugs*
    Best of luck! Can't continue though... Irvine.. dun'like 'im with mah Squall, and Zell.. O_o >_< No Zell in sexual context...

    U should change the summery gerily~ ^___^

    Thanks for the ride thus far, I'll definitely check out yer other stories though. Yer a really groood writer~~~ :3
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  • From asialisek on June 17, 2009
    Up to Chap.9.

    Viva'le PLOT!! XD Lol. Mmmm... like a slow cooked roast... sooooooooooooo much more tender an juicy than anything you could whip up in a microwave..
    that's a silly analogy.. but I stand by it.
    "LET THE JUICES COME TO A SLOW BOIL~" Lol. **reading on..**
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  • From Shi_koi on April 14, 2009
    *heart*

    ...Er...btw, if you're not doing SxS, I don't suppose I can sway you into possibly thinking about Irvine/Squall can I?

    Ever hopeful, and loving this fic to bits (it's gone on my rec list!),

    ~Shi-koi~

    *heart*
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  • From Shi_koi on April 14, 2009
    *heart*

    I wibble, muchly.

    This story is just so amazing. I've never come across GF!Seifer before, and he's absolutely fascinating! I love the plot in this, and the fact that you're fleshing out the story and not going 1, 2, 3, sex. (1 being meet, 2 being argue/fight and 3 being falling in lust) It makes everything ever so much more delicious. Oh the anticipation! The interaction! The angst! The fun!

    The characterisation of Seifer is amazing, especially since you've managed to convey his changes whilst keeping him in character. I have to admit that Squall is my favourite character ever, but this Seifer is teetering just next to/below him. --grin--

    God! There's so much I love about this story! I just can't put it all into words.

    I am really looking forward to where you're taking us next.

    *heart*
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  • From ANON - mjrn on November 06, 2008
    It's okay if it's not Seifer/Squall, but please, please don't make Squall go anywhere near Zell. He's nice and everything, but he's not one of my favorite characters. Irvine is okay. I can handle Irvine. I guess it doesn't really matter to me if it is Zell, I'm still interested in the story. And the fact that there's no sex, that doesn't bother me either. Do what you want; I'll read it anyway.
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  • From margyy on November 05, 2008
    I'm really sad to hear that this won't end up being SeiferxSquall, as it would have been an amazing fic. I really can't stand Squall with anyone else, but I will keep reading since it's a interesting fic :)
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  • From Faoiltierna on November 04, 2008
    I will be patient and wait :-)

    I will also add you onto my Livejournal friends list, so I can see (and maybe make fun of) any silly flamers.
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  • From koloruki on November 04, 2008
    Well, I don't care. There are many others that are full of hot sexy action but they do not have stories like this. I look forward to your stories. They are good and with sense. They are satisfying to people like me who likes reading fanfiction with less of kinky action. I'll be honest that I was disappointed that there will be no Squall/Seifer action or any other pairings out here who will be having hot kinky sex but the story without a nice plot will be useless. Please continue o write this story and surprise us with more to come.
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  • From IntHellsing on November 03, 2008
    ...I'll be honest. I think I may have been scared off by the sudden now Squall/Not Seifer change.
    I was really looking forward to seeing how exactly Seifer and Squall were going to eventually get together, hoping it would be a long, drawn out process. Give me time to get really into the story before it happened... and now. Anything else will just be really disapointing.

    I like the way you write, so maybe once it's been long enough that I've forgotten what this story was about originally... I'd like to come back and read it... but for now I just can't. :|
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  • From Faoiltierna on October 31, 2008
    Hey, at least you know you have three loyal readers! Yay plot!

    And nice plot-twist! And nice room!

    I understand, btw. My smut, even if I start in media res, always develops plot, characterization, back stories...sad, really. You'd think we were real writers or something! :grin:

    Good story, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Mjrn on October 30, 2008
    Aww that was nice and unexpected of Squall! I guess, Squall isn't materialistic, so what would he do with all that money, anyway? It's nice that he was thinking about Selphie when he agreed. And Squall next in line to be president? I don't know. That'll be crazy, and I can't imagine him liking it all that much, but I guess we'll see. Anyway, good job. Can't wait for more (even though Squall and Seifer aren't getting together :( )
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  • From ANON - KiKa on October 30, 2008
    More! More! More! :-D
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  • From Squallsama on October 30, 2008
    Well, wasn't this a surprise! I got like 3 new chapters all at once! XD I'm so HAPPY you updated this!!!! *does a dance* It's getting interesting, what with the possibility of Squall becoming President Squall! LOL that sounds funny to me. And I like the plot thank you. Keep it that way, who gives a shit about those immature people who only want sex. While it's good, plot only makes it sweeter once you finally get to it and I'm REALLY looking forward to the sexes when it comes. I do hope you keep it main Seifer/Squall though; (because really, thats the whole reason for reading this!) I'm still trying to figure out how you're gonna do that. XP And I can just see the chaos that is going to ensue when Seifer shows up in Esthar. >.< Oh man, what a day for them huh? Poor Seifer.

    Anyway, keep up the awsome work, can't wait for more!
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  • From IntHellsing on October 25, 2008
    Your warning about lack of smut for a long while is really amusing.
    This story is more than interesting enough to continue reading in the mean time.

    I really like the idea behind this, also. I can't wait for more.
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