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Reviews for Fire-Cross Knight

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  • From ANON - Mjrn on October 25, 2008
    And everything comes back to Seifer! Good job on this chapter, you've drawn me even more. I am curious to find out how this is all going to connect in the future--Seifer's being a GF, Seifer's fear, Squall's suicide mission, and now going to FH. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Faoiltierna on October 25, 2008
    Hey, I enjoy plot with my smut! :grin:

    The story is progressing well...wonder what Squall will find in Esthar...

    Have you decided on the pairing? You were up in the air at one time. Or are you keeping it a surprise?
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  • From ANON - Dunee on October 23, 2008
    Hey,

    nuts to the people that don't want plot! I mean, smut is great and all, but plot makes it all the more awesome! And your plot certainly is shaping up to verrrrry interesting indeed!

    Great to see two updates in quick succession, after a little break, I was worried you'd dropped the fic! Anyway, I really love the direction the fic is taking, look forward to more updates, good luck!

    xx
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  • From ANON - Mjrn on October 22, 2008
    A good story doesn't need smut, and if there's smut somewhere within the pages, then it's a bonus. A good bonus. Besides, around this time in the story, any type of smut would be... awkward. They are both facing inner demons that, I think, need to be dealt with a little more thoroughly before they allow the other in. This chapter is a good example, since Seifer and Squall sat in a long silence because neither knew how do deal with the fear--Squall didn't know how to deal with someone else's fear while Seifer clearly couldn't deal with someone else knowing that he could feel fear. Anyway, I feel a little unnerved at Squall's departure from Seifer's room. I really wished they tried sorting things out a little, but that would be too out of character for both. :( Good job on this chapter and I hope you've got another coming soon!
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  • From ANON - Mjrn on October 22, 2008
    Yay! An update. Good job on this chapter. I'm angry at Cid for being stupid and sending Squall on a suicide mission without thinking about his wellbeing--and with a workaholic like Squall, you have to think about his wellbeing for him because he certainly won't--but I suppose he's a mercenary and that's expected. Anyway, what is Seifer going to do in Squall's absence, I wonder? I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter and find out.
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  • From ANON - kika on October 22, 2008
    Take your time for the smut, I like the rythm of this story. As long as you update often of course :-D
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  • From ANON - Mjrn on September 23, 2008
    Wow, this is really good. And you left it right there. I guess it wasn't really a cliff hanger, but I was just reading one chapter right after another and was getting really into it, and then I realized that it ended right at chapter 7! *sigh* well, anyway, good job on this story. Can't wait for more. btw, I really like the idea you had, about making Seifer a GF. That was really unexpected and really original. Kudos. You've drawn me with it.
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  • From Squallsama on September 10, 2008
    This is a very interesting story. Unique ideas, very clever. I like it. I like how you write it how you play the game, but some of it a little too unrealistic. Like the computer inputting Seifer into the system... it sort of didn't make sense. The magics and healing though, and the limit breaks, I liked that. I'd really love to see more of this and how you plan to build their relationship. Please continue with more!
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  • From ANON - garnet nite on September 07, 2008
    loving the story line its very original squal/seifer is a great pair. hope u write more faster lol
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  • From Zodiaceclipse on September 06, 2008
    Really like where you are going with this. Very interesting idea and a nice smooth read.
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  • From ANON - bossy_foodshield on September 03, 2008
    yay you updated!!! i still like it very much... poor squall, he's so lost...
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  • From ANON - wick on August 31, 2008
    Great fic... the idea that Seifer is a GF is very unique, love his limit break
    Look forward for more fighting scene on Seifer new skills as a GF.
    Hope you will be updating soon ^-^
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  • From Kiriana on August 16, 2008
    I really like this story and the direction it's going. XD I love how you've characterized Seifer after the war's over. I hope you post more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Joey Jo Jo on August 10, 2008
    This is a good start and its all ready got me hooked. Please update soon.
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  • From margyy on August 10, 2008
    Wow! Just wow! I'm REALLY loving this fic so far! What an awesome idea having Seifer become a GF! Though are you gonna explain why Ifrit wasn't there, and hopefully Fujin and Raijin will come back to Garden too...
    Anyways, can't wait for another update!!
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