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Reviews for Killing Memory Lane

By : jadedragon83
  • From BrightShadow on February 15, 2009
    I... I really don't have too much to say, other than what Pairing Guy has already pointed out, except...

    More please?
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  • From BrienBoru on November 27, 2008
    It's Feral, not Ferrel.

    Other than that, I'd like to see where you take this.
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  • From ThePairingGuy on November 05, 2008
    Relm is too wizened at the beginning, but otherwise the characterizations here are very good. Just a few problems:
    1."The Ferrel Boy" should be "The feral boy".
    2.The amount of time that's passed since Kefka's defeat is inconsistent. Sometimes you say it's been 7 years, sometimes 10 years.
    3.I'd like to know why Relm carries around her feces in a cloth belt. Why doesn't she just leave them in the woods or whatever? Does she like showing off her own droppings to people? It's just...weird.

    Anyway, otherwise I like that you've taken this to several years after FF6; it's too weird when Gau/Relm romance happens just a month or two after. And Relm's good and rebellious and self-centered, as we've always known her. I like how quickly she gets offended by everyone, especially her grandfather. The flashbacks with Gau were great, too, not too corny. I'm glad that you don't make him into a doofus like most writers seem to; Gau is essentially very intelligent and cunning. Overall one of the best things I've seen in the FF6 section.
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