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Reviews for Private Cabin

By : Darketsu
  • From on June 29, 2009
    P.S. WTF SO FEW REVIEWS. But I completely agree with what they said.
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  • From on June 29, 2009
    It's so weird when sometimes you can read a person's fanfiction and know that they fantasize about the same things as you do. At any rate, I think you're probably one of the better FFXII writers I've read so far (considering most of them are yaoi, which I don't really like), and taking the popularity of it into account (as there are only like 100 fics on this site so far). I hope you've written more, though, involving other characters as well, 'cause I'm just about to go lurk your user profile to see what else you've written. I love that you describe the sounds they make (i.e. "Oh God!", "A-almost done..", "I'm gonna--!"), etc. I dunno why, that's kind of what I like the most about reading dirty fics - the descriptions of the sounds and physical reactions and stuff, which you do well. ANYWAY.. I'd really love it if you did other couples or if you could tell me about other FFXII dirty fic sites/whatever, that would be GREAT. Oh, AND! I love how you placed it in Giruvegan. Whenever I thought about possible scenarios to place the characters in, I NEVER considered Giruvegan for a second. I like how you described the sigils as "singing". I always thought that I was the only one who noticed the noise they made, haha. Anyway, if there's another good FFXII fanfic site that you know of, hit my up - my username is Fuffuster.
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  • From PinkTonberry on May 25, 2009
    This is amazing! Thoughtfully written, very descriptive, and with good grammar and spelling so as not to detract from the action. I love your darling portrayal of the two. It's everything I want in an erotic fanfic. Thank you for sharing this!
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  • From Jyet on December 27, 2008
    Wow, excellent story! Incredibly hot, with a great setup and impeccable spelling and grammar, which is rare in het fics - hell, fanfiction in general. It's too bad you've only got one story up, because I'd love to read more of your work. Keep it up!
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