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By : Rina76
  • From schwaerze on February 06, 2009


    'I’ve set myself a goal to try every one there is on the drink menu tonight' - Now thatīs a task XD

    So she was fat? Thatīs nice, I like her^^ No seriously.

    'I can understand why Shandi loves women with them being all soft and perfumed and pretty but if they ain’t got a penis, they just don’t do it for me.' - Does that mean a woman (transvestite/transsexual) with a penis would do it for her then?

    "I hate going if people can hear me." Haha, so true! Especially when itīs perfectly silent and then thereīs this... sound piercing the calm, quiet, steril bathroom atmosphere... horrible.

    I must say I was pleasantly surprised to read about your OCīs outer appearance. Short hair and piercingīs are not that very often too find (ffīs) and easily distinguishes this from a Mary-Sue^^

    Poor Loz doesnīt get much love... Big and ugly, where the hell is he ugly?! :D

    Is 'gayer' even a word in the sense itīs meant here? ^^ But I liked the girls argument for some reason, it seemed rather honest, even though it was superficial.

    Haha, Kadaj the dominating, evil patriarch XD rofl

    I must say that it is really good seeing you writing 'normal' activities.You do that very well and keep it very interesting. I mean I already knew that you were great on characterising and writing smut, but writing daily life situations is another matter... I really enjoy the humorous tone that goes with the fic. It makes everything appear in a lighter athmosphere, and it makes your OC likeable. Since this is written from her POV it shows that she doesnīt take herself too serious (plus points!!!). Also the fact that you mentioned that she was married already...- I know itīs totally irrational but somehow it makes me thing that your OC is mature and not some teeny brat (which again makes her sympathetic in my eyes). It somehow indicates (for me) that she is someone who knows what sheīs talking about... I certainly expect now that she will be a complex character despite her superficial claim to just want to get laid.
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  • From ANON - Lunatic Angel on February 01, 2009
    Can opener?
    -holds a brand new can opener up-
    I do!
    ;)

    I'm liking this fic very much so far.
    I hope to see an update soon!
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  • From schwaerze on January 30, 2009
    Oh, FINALLY *is super excited* And I must admit youīve chosen a rather brave topic^^ But knowing your other story I think you can pull it off without drifting into the trap Mary-Sues should generally be snapped in half with... Iīm really curious now (and my expectations are high :D), so letīs start^^

    Aahhh... I love your detailed describtion! *full fangirl mode* I want to have hair like them too. I bet they never have trouble with split ends...

    "Guns and alcohol really don’t mix." So true.

    And Loz acting like the other twoīs bodyguard- so cute! (Though it might not be once youīve gotten in the direct line of his fist... -.-)

    "All together the lot of them look like villains out of some futuristic movie." What observation skills XD

    HAHA; poor Yazoo almost gets attacked by a lesbian, rofl! But I guess thatīs better than getting called 'dumb-looking beefcake'... Or is it?

    I canīt believe they handed over their weapons! Though they certainly donīt need them to cause trouble, but still... Poor Tommy XD

    ...I was actually squirming when I read your describtion of Yazoo flowing through the masses like an angel/ ageless vampire (YAY!!!! XD). Heīs my favorite (you probably noticed from my not so subtle idealisations *cough*), but this was just SO beautiful! Probably the best describtion I ever read.

    Heh- Loz, married with 5 kids. What a picture :) But I think he actually could be a good father, somehow^^

    Okay: I canīt say much about your OC yet, since she hasnīt really done anything yet. Iīd like to see a more detailed describtion of her outer appearance, though. And so far she isnīt annoying :) (I donīt know why, but somehow I see some kind of 'Buffy' before my inner eye XD Maybe itīs because of the repartee...)


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