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Reviews for Fallen

By : crystalwind
  • From ANON - ravensbff on October 05, 2009
    You have no idea how happy this update makes me. Truly. I thought this story was dead, and I just check for an update out habit, and - hot damn! - there it was! I'm going to be compulsively checking for updates every few hours now. XD

    As for the grammar, I like it the way it is. There's a difference between simply not knowing how to string together a grammatically correct sentance and making a stylistic choice. Personally, I think it was the right one. Axel (and Reno, too) is one of those people it would just feel forced to write about in a clinical type of way.

    Anyway, yayz! I'm gonna go fangirl now.
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  • From spooksies on September 28, 2009
    mana-garmr!!! i missed ya!

    and so what if the chappies are short! it gets the point arcoss. and i know that they will get longer, when ya have a chance.

    that said...........YOU ARE ALIVE!!!!!!!

    very interseting........i likie

    laters! miko ~_^
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 20, 2009
    You're doing well. All I ask is that you continue. If you ever need or want a sounding board, I'm available at winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com or wolf.kin.flight@gmail.com. And if you just need someone to vent to or rant to, well...it wouldn't be the first time it's happened to me. Nowhere near. I'm the one my group typically turns to for leadership, which means I get stuck playing counselor/mediator (or, as they themselves nicknamed me, "Boss-B*tch") so often that it sometimes strikes me as ridiculous. But, hey, they're fun to be around, and they're almost always good to know. Besides, I'm fairly sure the main reason they all come to me so often is because they know that, for all my temper, I'm highly pragmatic and reasonable, and I have a way of organizing the problems that need to be dealt with in my mind until everything just falls into place and starts working again. So if you ever feel like asking me to do the same for you, I have no objections. It may be a few days before I can respond, but I'll get back to you as soon as I can, and I'll pitch in to help as needed. I know other enlisted people, and--trust me--you're not the only one who dislikes just about everything to do with being enlisted. And, while I am having some problems with my life as well, I have this tendency...I deal better with my own problems when I spend more time focusing on helping other people deal with their problems. Don't ask me how that works; I think it just makes my problems seem more like irritations, and so I spend less time worrying about them.
    Still, my offers stand. Distract me! It will help you more than me, but it will help me as well. XD
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  • From ANON - Ravensbff on March 26, 2009
    OMFG, I am so glad you started this! I've been eagerly anticipating it since The Reaper ended. Reno and Axel are both my favorite people in their respective games (not that I don't like the actual heroes. I just like the bad ones, and I have serious thing for redheads).

    Anyway, much love for this story already!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2009
    ooh ooh ooh yay!!! me want more!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
    ASOTA
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