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Reviews for Silver Wings

By : akksgurl
  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2009
    I really liek ShuyinxLenne, so it's nice to see a fic that covers their lifes in Zanarkand, as well as some other characters. I would have never thought of mixing Zaon and Yunalesca with Shuyin and Lenne, so good point there.
    I shall keep reading
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  • From ArchangelM127 on November 30, 2009
    Hi, it's me again!

    Haven't had a chance to check Internet stuff in quite a while, and coming back to find two new chapters in this fic was a pleasant surprise. I still love the way this is going, and I can't wait to read more! I particularly love the sunrise motif you used in Chapter 3. That's perhaps my all-time favorite moment with Tidus and Yuna, and it works equally wonderfully with Shuyin and Lenne.

    Judging by the update stamp, you might have given up on this story. Please, consider going back to it! It's one of a handful of stories on this site that hold up to the standards I set for my own work, and it's an absolute delight to read. :)
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  • From ArchangelM127 on May 25, 2009
    I must say I'm very impressed. I can find no flaws in your reasoning as to the canon, and your read on the characters is superb. The one thing that bugs me a bit are the handful of simple grammatical errors scattered throughout the story. If you don't already have an editor, I'm happy to lend my services should you wish. Looking forward to reading more of the story!
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