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Reviews for Tease - COMPLETE

By : albedosreqium
  • From kirastastefultragedy on May 05, 2010
    I just read through the whole 39 chapters last night and today. Ooo... is cloud gonna run to reno... dun dun dunnn the story has been fun, nail biting, and hot all at the same time. Maybe you should just have these poor sexy guys all have a big ole pile of fun... poor poor frustrated reno and poor neglected cloud and seph too... yay... cant wait to read more!!!
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  • From Faoiltierna on May 02, 2010
    Uh oh...Zack will have some serious making up to do now!! I mean, on the one hand, I understand Urgent, and Genesis clones running amuck does qualify, but leaving poor Cloud like that...ouch!

    I love, love, love the idea of Rufus and Sephiroth fighting over Reno! I still have no idea who Reno will end up with! Oo, maybe a threesome? *grin*

    This story is certainly living up to its Title, though! :-)
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  • From VegaKapera on March 28, 2010
    I really liked the different POVs in this story.

    No clue how you've done it but you've actually made me like Cloud and I can't stand him most times. Loved the conversation between Tseng and Rufus, 'Paper Tiger' really does hit the mark!

    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :D
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  • From Faoiltierna on March 13, 2010
    Indeed! Poor Reno!!

    I do hope that mean Rufus gets what's coming to him! Darn him!

    And I was so hoping Sephiroth would be the reason ;-)
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  • From VegaKapera on February 25, 2010
    Yay you updated!

    This was a very sweet chapter and you make me like Zack/Cloud (I'm normally not able to stand Cloud even though I love Zack).
    My fav chapters are the ones with Reno though (or all of them) because you simply write him so well!

    Looking forward to the next update and hope that my reviewing abilities will have returned by then.

    /Vega Kapera
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  • From Faoiltierna on February 11, 2010
    Okay, I found this fic yesterday and am now caught up.

    Wow. Uhm, yeah. Poor Reno *laughs* I am rooting for him to get some, though! And I'm kind of hoping for Sephiroth! Not enough Sephiroth/Reno love in this world! *grin*

    So...yeah. Cinnamon and vanilla happen to be a favorite scent combination of mine, as well. I had to laugh when I read that. (If you check out my profile here, I've written a LOTR fic titled that! LOL!)

    Excellent story, lots of lovely hot lemon...and poor, poor Reno. *laughs again* I look forward to the next chapters! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Yaoilover on February 10, 2010
    I don't usually do the whole review thing, but this story has seriously got me hooked. I look forward to every chapter, and seeing the update is one of the highlights of my day. I'm never had even thought about Reno and Sephiroth together before this story, and now I love the idea. You're so great at writing all these characters and weaving their storylines together. Great job!
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  • From ANON - kyouteki on February 10, 2010
    Who cares if rufus is in calm, give the man a mobile! lol you could probably squeeze in a risque phone conversation. I really thought the jumping scene and the helicopter conversation with sephiroth was amazing it gave me shivers!
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  • From VegaKapera on February 08, 2010
    Loved Sephiroth in this latest chapter!
    I know my reviews aren't much to hang in the christmas tree (yes, direct translation of a saying. Doesn't work too well) but I hope they make you feel that someone reads and enjoys them (a lot!).

    Vega Kapera
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  • From TokiMirage on January 31, 2010
    oh my, bet Sephiroth didn't anticipate THAT. mwahahahah!!

    Absolutely INFATUATED with this fic!! Your love circles are like, complex and crazy! XD Looking forward to more!!
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  • From VegaKapera on January 29, 2010
    If that shirt makes a reappearance I will be very happy.
    Being a big fan of Tseng it's always nice to see him appear ^^. What can I say? That man always needs more love.
    The dream sequence was a cheap trick but you pulled it off very nicely, the reader sort of follows Reno's thoughts and travels with him from 'hm..' to 'WTF'. Me like.

    Love Sephiroth's stalking and his inner dialogue during that. Reno is Reno and Reno is always wonderful to see.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - phoenixandashes on January 04, 2010
    Great story and great chapter! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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  • From Sajirasama on January 03, 2010
    you do know you are tesing me not getting reno laid... i wonder who it will be... maybe a major orgie with zack cloud reno seph rufus?
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  • From VegaKapera on January 01, 2010
    I've grown really fond of this story and I find myself eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

    This story is well written, has a balanced amount of detail and a varied language that makes it very pleasant to read. The dialogue is fantastic and it is nice to see how you use their inner voices, not many fanfiction authors are able to pull that off but I must say that it is a joy to see how you use that tool in your story telling. The amount of thought you have put into shaping the little twists exceeds what at least 85% of all fanfiction writers out there tend to do.

    The one wish I have is that I would love to see more of Tseng. You present him wonderfully and he does, quite frankly, need more love within VII fanfiction.

    Vega Kapera
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  • From EmeraldRains on December 20, 2009
    So I feel bad because I just noticed there are no reviews for this and well it's such a cute story that someone should leave you praise for the wonderful writing and even though I'm not so good with praise I'm going to try so here goes...aww it's cute and sexy all at once and I love the drunken lush Cloud and poor confuzzled Zack.
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