Reviews for Chaos in Costa del Sol

BY : simonveil


  • From ANON - AvianaHelena on June 30, 2011

    Not bad. It held my attention, and the characterization was good. Chaos rocks, of course. Grammar needs work; the phrase that came to mind was "holy run-on sentence, Batman!" Also caught some misspellings, but all in all it's nothing a good beta reader can't fix.
    Verdict: This one doesn't suck. Off to the next.

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  • From ANON - Perverted Girl on September 18, 2010

    Oh lordie... *nosebleed*
    It's been a while since anyone wrote fics with Cid on the...er, bottom.

    That was sooo hot.

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