Reviews for Unpredictable

BY : ZiggyPasta

  • From Lysiaamazon on September 29, 2010

    What I wanna know is why this hot little story has so little reviews....? Are people just not paying attention to this excellently written story. Reno was perfect, innocent and then raunchy and sexy as expected. Sephiroth's curiosity was so well done. Pursing Reno was absolutely sinfully hot! I really loved then and although I figured this was only a one shot, I certainly would love to see more. I adored how you wrote the both of them and Zack's reaction at the end...made this story amazing to me...i loved the hotness and the silly bit at the end....Cloud's not so innocent ahahhhahaah! Thanks dear, wonderful story!
    -Lys :D

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