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Reviews for Raising Angeal

By : KitsuneArasi
  • From ANON - dab on November 24, 2012
    more need more0_0
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  • From ANON - dasha on August 21, 2012
    super cute cant wait for ending

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  • From YourBeautifulNightmare on January 25, 2011
    This chapter was seriously on my list of cuteness. I love your idea of Zack helping Angeal in his time of need. XD
    And I wouldn't change anything. I love your idea on Zack still being a grunt, Sephiroth, Genesis and Cloud being kids, and Angeal going to Zack... just... so cute XP
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  • From YourBeautifulNightmare on January 25, 2011
    Wa following your story on FF, glad to see you updated here too! (Note: For the rest, take my words with a grain of salt. I'm far from being an accomplished writer lol)
    Your first chapter leaves much to be wanted. It's lacking in detail, length, and generally feels thrown out there. My suggestion would be to get inside Angeal's head a bit more and capture what he's feeling and what the hell's going on. If I didn't know how good the story gets in the next couple chapters then I'd probably give it a 2/5(...that is, if I ever voted on the first few chapters anyways)

    But I hope you update the one of FF. I almost thought you'd abandoned it.
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  • From Faoiltierna on January 16, 2011
    Oh, that was cute!

    Interesting story, I look forward to lots more chapters! *grin*

    And I adored the line about thirteen year olds...I vaguely recall that age...
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