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Reviews for The Obvious Solution

By : GoddessVirage
  • From ANON - Rei Tsuki.No on December 02, 2015
    Okay, yeah this was sooooo.... HOT!!!!!😍😝😻😎 I loved it!! I mean I'm not normally a fan of Seph/Cloud Yaoi, but I must say this one is good. I also like the way you portrayed the fact that JENOVA took over Seph's mind, and he didn't give it willingly. I like that he had to fight for control of his mind. I mean if that was all the problem had been in the first place, (I don't mean to diss FFVII) but saving Seph would have been so much easier like you said. Aerith wouldn't have had to die. Possibly Advent Children wouldn't have had to happen, (but who knows on that, you know Hojo, bastard being as twisted as he is). And maybe Genesis and Angeal could have been saved because Seph could have been there for them to get them through what they went through. Although, that could be wishful thinking on my part, those two are also faves of mine along with our dear General. But like I said in the beginning of my review, I loved it seriously, consider writing more like this.
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  • From animekid on February 15, 2012
    This was hot. I wish I could favorite this forever.

    Icing on the cake was the ending "GOD THIS IS HOT!"

    I laughed so damn hard at that part and the Turks going "wtf....." This needs more reviews.
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  • From JunshinAi on November 06, 2011
    Absolutely fantastic! I haven't read a fiction as good as this one in years. I was pleasantly surprised to have stumbled upon it. I must admit that I was so intrigued by your other story Ghosts that I just had to read this one as well! Your an excellent writer, and very good at portraying the world this is set in. I also must add that I love that you've chosen to make Cloud the Seme. This choice is rarely used, and I would very much like to see more of it. Thank you so much for writing something so original and steamy hot! hehe >
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  • From GodOfInsanity on April 11, 2011
    I enjoyed this one immensely. It was well written and flowed smoothly.

    I loved how Cloud kept punching, hitting, and kicking the shit out of "Jenova". I also liked how Sephiroth was portrayed more as a man wanting love/affection rather than just an insane nutcase. He was raised (more like tortured) as a sort of experiment all his life and treated like a weapon. Never really knew love and then boom, Jenova comes along and offers it to him. It's understandable. And like Cloud realized, maybe all Sephiroth really needed was some love.

    This was probably meant to be more of a PWP, but it had a sort of story to it, which made it feel like a romantic action story. The hero battling the other man, the hero winning the other man over to his side, the hero...well, yeah, doing the other man, and then both fleeing for their lives. Smut is smut to me (which is why I don't like most PWP's), but I do love a good story and characterization, which was somehow embedded in this story quite nicely enough.

    In my opinion, Cloud makes a good top and he definitely did the job well in this one. Sephiroth also was a breathtaking bottom and he didn't seem girly or over submissive, which is good. It was written as two men having sex, which is good and realistic.

    The ending was slightly comical and I liked that. Good job. Whatever prompt that was, I think you nailed it.
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  • From angeldove21 on February 24, 2011
    Parden my language but Oh my god that was so fucking great! I've never read something as wonderful as that story. It was very wonderfully descriptive and I could actually see everything around them. I can't find anything wrong with it or anything that could be fixed. Congratulations on the wonderful job.
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  • From zeiff43p on February 24, 2011
    The obvious solutions are always the hardest to realize, eh? But best realized in a, literally, crumbling city.

    This is an absolutely ridiculous round of sex for the duo and I had to comment on it. You know, if it had just been good old fucking in the middle of Midgar I would have been perfectly fine. But having Midgar fall apart as they have the best sex of their lives? Definitely a must. Explosions, fire, billowing smoke - perfect romantic sex setting.

    Thank you for writing this. It made my day completely.
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