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Reviews for Resident Fantasy

By : sohmakun631
  • From ANON - stormi on November 25, 2013
    I was pleased with this story. You kept to the characters' personalities, and meshed it well with resident evil's. Would like to see what else you can do. Couple bits of advice: #1. Don't use "of course" or "smirked" so much. Use a thesaurus to find other words and broaden your vocabulary. "of course" was used the way people use "um" "er" or "uh" in speech. Just as a filler. You are amazing, and don't need it. "and then" was another one. Try "later" or "after that" or something different. You have such talent! Use it! Looking forward to the next story!
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  • From ANON - Tasma on January 15, 2013
    I've never read a word of your story, I just wanted to say that doesn't it suck when you have 3000 some readers and 50 votes and its all for free. Not a single review beyond 1.
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  • From KiraxItachi on November 22, 2011
    I love where this is going its funny how people bring some cool as hell sit to the writing table keep it up. I look forward to reading more and check out my profile too. I have an idea on a pairing for one of the other stories and maybe you can make it work to your advantage as well. A paring of Tifa Locheart and Albert Wesker, I think it would make a hell of a fun time and good for some laughs of you think about it.
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