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Reviews for The Education of Hope Estheim

By : Slayzer
  • From Ronin on June 16, 2012
    I thought this was a great story, and I'd love to see a further chapter.
    Also, a 'side--story' with Snow and Sazh tag-teaming Vanille sounds really hot. I'd also like to see you make Vanille more of a whorish character. I tend not to be bothered by OOC actions, that's why its 'fan fiction'.
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  • From JViper on May 27, 2012
    Nice seeing you continue the story. Wish there was more FFXIII fics out there.
    Anyway, like you said I too think Lightning came off a little too much on the submissive side. Don't get me wrong, I don't think she should be the stoic Cloud/Squall at all, but she should be, even if just a bit, a little manipulative(in a good sense). She is the comanding type and here she's just too fast to fall on the submissive role.
    Loved your Fang though. The way she leads both Hope and Lightning to hotness certainly was the high point in both chapters. That and the faux plot twist at the end. I say faux because sometimes I forgot that erotica can have plot, and although it was just a little hook you got me fished.
    Looking forward to what you come up with for a third. Maybe don't make it the same night to give a little breath for character development(yeah, porn I know but I think it would actually add to the sexy in this story) and a change of location.

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  • From JViper on March 19, 2012
    Really liked the story. I wish you'd have dedicated a little more time with Fang teasing Hope. Maybe on future chapters?
    Looking forward to part 2, and maybe a little vanille action since aside for one fic she's only in yuri.
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  • From Pulsor93 on March 07, 2012
    This story is pretty damn impressive. Can't wait to see more.

    You willing to take requests?
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