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Reviews for The Little Guy

By : TokiMirage
  • From ANON - Lenny on August 21, 2012
    Wow. This story is totally bad ass. I've read some FF time travel fics, but this one takes the cake. The plot is riveting and the way the characters are portrayed makes me want to keep coming back for some more SephCloud goodness. So please, pretty please, keep up the good work and don't abandon such a super yummy fic:)
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  • From animekid on August 18, 2012
    Love the Wutaian, love Reno, love the "Oh shit Seph is saying my name like that and oh fuck."

    Man this story is awesome as hell. 4am reading this.
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  • From animekid on August 18, 2012
    Damn I love this chapther in Seph's pov. Good stuff. Man this is one of the better stories with this pairing totally.
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  • From animekid on August 18, 2012
    Fuck I love deadpan snarker Cloud and how screwed up this is. And Zack. And how everyone is IC. And oh I'm laughing my ass off here.
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  • From ANON - Alliey on August 16, 2012
    I am totally and completely obsessed with this story! Can't wait for your next update :)
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  • From ANON - Petit Minet on August 11, 2012
    I love your story! Itīs well written and has a exiting twist to the old "Cloud goes back in time" plot. I usually donīt read stories with uke Sephiroth but yourīs so good I will keep on reading ( maybe you can throw a little bit seme Sephiroth / uke cloud around to balance it nee?) either way thanks for the fabulous fic!
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  • From ANON - lionesspuma on August 07, 2012
    I am very enchanted with this story. It drew me in so much that I stayed up all night to read it. Even though I have to go to work in 30 minutes I still need to tell you what a wonderful job you are doing. The balance of dark and light aspects of this story is very well done and I cannot wait to read more of it. Thank You very much for posting.
    I have not set up an account here yet though I do have one on Deviant art and one on fanfiction .net.

    Also I am glad you had fun at band camp and I hope that you are doing well at home.
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  • From ANON - Aerawyn on July 31, 2012
    TokiMirage,

    This is one of the most interesting and unique stories I've read in some time. I very much enjoy the "Cloud's Time Travel for Redemption" story concept, and you've given it a new perspective and twist that has made it exciting.

    You've done an excellent job of fleshing out your characters. I think your Cloud is interesting and your Sephiroth one of the more realistic I've seen in a while. Too often Seph is written to one extreme and I think you've found a nice middle ground. I love that Cloud didn't immediately try to follow the same path he did in his younger years. I also think your Hojo is well-written and moderate as opposed to the over-the-top crazy versions I've read.

    I also love that you made Cloud so reactive to Mako and that it triggers lapses into his Zack-sense. It was a little heavy for my initial taste, but you utilize those moments so well for moving the plot forward that I came around to it.

    Thank you for your words. I have already read the story a second time because, like a good book, I just can't wait to get to the next bit. Yours is precisely the kind of creativity that might otherwise go unappreciated if not for Fanfiction. I look forward to reading more from you as soon as you can get it into ink.

    Aerawyn
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  • From ANON - sunset in love on July 29, 2012
    this is the second time i re-read the whole chapter, really love this fic... cloud was simply awesome, confident and... well, effective! very nice change! cant wait foe the next update...
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  • From RJaneyP on July 26, 2012
    Your having one great orgy of a plot going here, don't know what road your taking with it? But you seem to be have a good' ol time. Just don't make Sephy go nut-so again, you need him to save Cloud little round perfect ass!

    In your time line what happen to Red General Gen and his big boy-hood General friend! Why did you make Reno such a Shin-Ra turkey- wuss!
    It likely your story is even confusing to the planet, let alone me1

    Gslinger
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  • From ANON - DeviousLilDevil on July 25, 2012
    I absolutely love how your story is going. Eagerly looking forward to the next update
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  • From Muci on July 23, 2012
    Man, you absolutely have to write more chapters. This is really amazing, I have never read better ff.
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  • From ANON - ladyshadow on July 22, 2012
    This is a great fanfic and i hope that you continue the story, i am looking forward to reading more chapters.
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  • From Muci on July 22, 2012
    wow,really good story. I like it
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  • From TypeZero on July 21, 2012
    This fic is awesome, I love it. By far one of the best time-travel fics out there. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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