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Reviews for Company Initiatives

By : KnaveOfDiamonds
  • From salarta on July 21, 2015
    Took me a while to get to this, but here I am!

    New chapter's good. Feminization isn't exactly my thing unless it really grabs me in some way, but I think you pulled it off nicely. "Feminization" isn't quite accurate, though, since I usually see it defined as a male character remaining biologically male but looking and acting more feminine. Here, from what I can tell, would be more like Male to Female (MtF) transformation.
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  • From ANON - Kira on October 29, 2012
    Next time, please, point out in summary that there're going to be OC in the story. Not everyone like OCs as main characters in canon world. Thank you.
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  • From salarta on October 27, 2012
    Greatly enjoyed this new chapter. Most fics don't try for major transformations, and especially not ones as severe as what happened with Aeris and Red. It makes me feel better, too, to know that there are other people that like that sort of thing; the lack of other writers doing anything like it had me feeling like I was pretty much alone there. Also, I think I've needed something like this; seeing what other people come up with and reading it is so much more fun for me lately than the limits of my own imagination. I especially liked Aeris' vagina getting completely sealed away and replaced with a scrotum and penis, she's always been daintily feminine and it added to making her more manly to fit her new role.

    Looking forward to what you do with Tifa!
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  • From ninesenshi on October 27, 2012
    Well, chap 2 was pretty hot. I hope to see Aerith mating with Tifa soon.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From salarta on October 26, 2012
    Good fic and chapter! A few minor typos but we all have those. I've always liked the concepts of public use, branding, public humiliation, etc. Also always glad to see characters that tend to get nothing, actually get something. This also gives me ideas for possibly continuing my FF7 fic, but probably not the exact same. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with Aeris since you prompted her next, it will also be interesting to see if your approach goes toward alternate universe or if you try to make future chapters fit into the canon; so far a person could pretend that what happened to Jessie is something that took place during the events of the game.

    A response to your review reply on your Shadow Hearts fic, unfortunately the admin team set up this rule where an author isn't allowed to leave replies to reviews in their stories' review sections, with the punishment that they'll take the story offline if you don't remove your review reply from the reviews section. They expect authors to respond to reviews of their work on the forum even though most people will never check the forums for that. They also wouldn't let me have a chapter devoted to showing research I did for a fic, so you probably couldn't have a separate chapter devoted to review replies either. I know, it's annoying, but it's their policy. If you want to send me a response to a review I leave, you can send an E-mail to me at raltese@yahoo.com , or just add it to an author note in a new chapter you write like some people do to slip around the site rules.

    Now that I've said that block of text! I'm flattered that my fics gave you a push to start writing fanfics, I don't think anyone has ever said that before. I do have ideas for FemSeymour/Lulu, but not enough drive to do them, plus some ideas would head into possibly squicky kinks.
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