Reviews for Trick or Treat?

BY : GodOfInsanity


  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on March 06, 2013

    I love this story so much!

    I love the pairing Vincent/Sephiroth! And I eaqually love the pairing Cloud/Sephiroth! I love both those pairings so much! I love submissive Sephiroth.

    Cant wait for more!

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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on January 06, 2013

    I love this story so much!

    Cant wait for more!

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  • From whitetiger on December 27, 2012

    The first time I read this chapter I was too engrossed in the story to notice any mistakes, and that is what really matters. The overall flow of the chapter is well done, which covers minor mistakes. So no need to worry :)
    I had to go back and read it a second time while shutting out my imagination (a very difficult thing to do). All I picked up on were some very minor punctuation errors and a little bit of a jerky start in the first couple of sentences. After that all is good, even the way you left us drooling for more at the end of the chapter. :)
    My only complaint is: What was the present Zack gave to Sephiroth?
    I really can't wait to see what you have in store for the group of trespassers *cough* (group orgy *wink*).

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