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Reviews for A Flash of Light

By : DrakeClawfang
  • From Games_Bandit on May 10, 2017

    Damn what a rush that would have been for hope! 

    -GB


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  • From ANON - on December 14, 2016

    Any chance of writing a chapter 2 where he visits her again?


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  • From ANON - Ehoh on September 17, 2016

    fantastic story, any chance you would write a continuation of this universe? Have Hope in the front row, pays to see her privately again and more brave this time around?


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  • From ANON - Zion man on June 02, 2016
    One of the best erotic stories I have ever read, the pacing and description was Amazing,loved it
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  • From TheRawGamer on May 09, 2015
    Wow. That was.. Interesting.
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  • From JViper on February 23, 2015
    Just when I was wondering if I'd ever see another FFXIII story from you, you drop this gem. I'm now officially a fan of your works. Your previous stories always had the awesome tease and reward to them that draws me in so much. This one is no exception.

    Using this new AU setting allowed for a pretty interesting tale. Somehow I think this option would actually make more sense than Light being accepted at such a young age in the military.

    The first dance was awesome and showed perfectly well how she'll always aim to be the best, no matter the job. She was a perfect dancer.

    Then you upped the stakes and the private show was just too good to be true. Loved the lap dance and the sex scene that came after. It shows both Light and Hope's personalities so well. Loved it all!

    Could I hope for a follow up? Or another story set in this universe? Either way great job!
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  • From ANON - Helga on February 22, 2015
    You have no idea how happy I was when I saw a new Hoperai fic ^^ I started browsing on my phone late night again (was having trouble sleeping) and I stumbled upon this oneshot. When I saw it was by you I grew excited cause I felt you wouldn't disappoint.

    I like how just like what you did with "Three Shades of Pink" you go the AU route. Even when you change the scene :) you don't lose touch of the little stuff like how you mentioned: Sweet Etro, she’s sexy. I think that's pretty cool and I'm glad we have writers like you in the FF XIII fandom.

    Ever thought of trying the Noir theme? I only bring that up cause I saw this animation of Light: http://ceaes.deviantart.com/art/Noir-487426715 and found it pretty saucy.

    You do have some misspelled words or grammar issues going on at some parts but that didn't stop me from reading cause I am a sucker for Hope x Light. I know they don't have a "romantic relationship" in this but I take what I can get xD haha

    I love how the announcer introduced Lightning on stage :D it was very crafty.

    Hope acting like a shy little school boy was quite comical I must say.

    Cid, Yaag and Jihl had a interesting role.

    Lightning taking the stripper route versus going into the military to support her sister was creative to me because it's later explained why she actually stays with the job xD the fact she knew all about Hope due to his demeanor was pretty hilarious but it was also stimulating/hot in a way when she comes out and says: I could throw you on that bed right now and ride you until you break, and you’d just lie there and let me.

    She's certainly self-assured and confident which is fitting cause that's the Light we all know in the canon universe :3

    The part that had me laughing in bed was when she told him to take his f-ing pants off & when she screamed at him to tell her that he wanted her to bang him hahaha I can just picture Lightning getting impatient, demanding or sexually frustrated with Hope lol

    I was sad I'll admit that there was no heavy duty action between H/L. I was hoping for some "sexy time" XDD but the sex between those two ended up being more of a teaser for me.

    Either way, I did enjoy this ^__^ and I am thankful you posted. I know you have another FF 13 piece that I haven't reviewed yet. I'll get to that one the next time I have trouble sleeping since reading your stuff makes for some good "bed time stories."
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