chap11, very nice to read.  I hope for more chaps or a similar story.

Guess i'm a little unclear about what chapters are different now

Just read chap10, very good read, very sexy.  I'm not generally a fan of re-writes but hopefully will be good.  Now we need pregnant Tifa to join them!

Mostly good finish, though I really would have preferred a threesome with Tifa to an orgy on the beach.  Hope you are inspired to write more or similar sometime.  Good fic.

Thanks for bringing it home, I would have liked to get a Tifa/Yuffie post-birth epilogue though

ah  abit short, but then again so was yuffies partner in this chapter

Glad to read more, though chap8 was pretty dull.  I feel that could have all been done in three paragraphs.  Looking forward to more with Red and hopefully preggo sex.  Hopefully Red has spent the last year turning Tifa into his breeding bitch.

Chap7, good to see another chap.  With Yuffie gone for now, it should be up to Tifa to satisfy Red's needs.  Hopefully Tifa ends up preggers after totally submitting.  Then Yuffie can come back, unable to deny her feelings any more. Hope to read more soon.

We are getting another chapter, right? :(

Chap 6, Tifa finally getting some action.  Damage is already done, now Red really needs to just take her hard.  Hopefully Yuffie is bred.  Red should get two mates out of this.

Chap 5, nice to see another so soon.  I bet he can totally get her pregnant and Tifa too, if she finds them mating on the beach.  Hope to read more soon.

I've been lurking on this site for years, but I finally had to make an account just so I could review this story. It's great! Your style is really fun and engaging, and you bring out the character's personalities so well. I'm looking forward each new chapter, especially when Tifa joins in the action. Keep it up!

Good to see chap4, if not quite the action I was hoping for.  Looking forward to more.  Really seems like Tifa needs some Red.

More plsthnx.

Idea: Yuffie is not ready for intercourse yet, so she secretly feeds Tifa Red's seed and then the two of them double-team Tifa together.  Sounds sexy to me.