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Reviews for Eternal Fall

By : HotaruReborn
  • From ANON - Dracul on August 07, 2005
    Hi.
    I've had your story saved on my hard drive for about.... 6 months now, and I am kicking myself repeatedly in the head for not reading it until four days ago (it's just so.... BIG!), anyway It was great!

    You are really, REALLY good at writing, and well... deciphering Sephiroth (he's not evil just misunderstood. My ultimate response) so now I have to check out more of your stuff.

    Thanx a bunch.

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  • From ANON - bl00dmoney on July 20, 2005
    That was the most beutiful thing that i have ever read. I really want to play the game....again....for the umpteenth time..;p You are an awsome writter, i think that you should really yhtink about grtting squares permission to make this a novel...so many people will read it. Sephy is my most favorate baddy ever, and you portrayed him so well. Thank you, for writting this, this is a story i will allways remember.




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  • From ANON - redtatsu on July 16, 2005
    Wow. This is the very first Final Fantasy fanfiction I have ever read. I'm not a game player and had no clue to who the characters were. For not nowing this and understanding the story tells me that you are a very talented writer. After this review, I am going to start on your other story. When will there be a sequel? Again, loved the story!
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  • From ANON - YUffieValentine on July 15, 2005
    Oh my gosh the story was SO good but the ending was sooooo sad!! I was almost srying at the end. I'm so glad to hear that you will be making a sequel though! You're right, it is to sad to end the story there. I hope that you post the new story soon and I look firward to it. Okay thats all thanks again bye.
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  • From ANON - Silver Foxglove on July 12, 2005
    Truly....this story is and was an amazing read. I'm amazed at the amount of thought, emotion, and detail you've put into this work, and, in my humble opinion, you've created a masterpiece. I nearly cried when I finally reached the ending....wonderful work...all I can really say about it lol. I'm bookmarking it..
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  • From ANON - N/A I\'m too shy ^^; on June 28, 2005
    *claps hands* I've been reading this from the very start - and I must say, this is the most detailed, most gruesome insight into Sephiroth's life I've ever read, and it was absolutely fantastic from the first chapter to the last. I applaude your skills - and I most certainly look forward to a possible sequel. I have so much to say about this fic, but words fail me - because I just simply loved this fanfic so much. I have the entire thing saved onto my hard drive to keep.
    Well done! And best of luck.

    An FFVII fan

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  • From Divine on June 19, 2005
    *claps enthusiastically Wow....this chapter influenced me a LOT. It was very emotional...and I almost had tears in my eyes when Sephy was thrown off the bridge T____T Whew....got to cool myself down for a moment....

    The best fic about Sephiroth's life before the game I've ever read! ^___^
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on June 15, 2005
    I thought it would be good to review again, as the last time I reviewed I was sobbing from the ending. * I rarely cry reading stories, hell I rarely cry* So was not sure if I made sense or not. Even now as I think back over the story, and the ending *I wish to be freed from this life* Damnit, that line stays with me. I am getting all teary eyed again. I am so glad there will be another chapter, and a sequel. Never has a story touched me like this one has, I doubt one will ever do that again, not in the way this one did. Brilliant job!!
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  • From ANON - Selena on June 07, 2005
    Awww... *Sniff sniff* A very well written story just WAY to sad. I love it though... please keep writing. I can't wait to read the sequel to this.
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  • From ANON - ~Ayla Pendragon~ on June 04, 2005
    I'm crying right now ! I'm such a sensitive woman. What a great story !! When I was begginning to tire of waiting, there's an update. As I'm bawling like a newborn, reading THE END, I'm thinking "What the hell, she's not leaving ME in that state !(yeah, egocentric)" But, you're working on a sequel ! THANK YOU ! I'll keep looking for updates from you ! And please, I'm looking for a real happy ending for Seph, pleeeeaaase ! The ending... the cake... the wish... tears falling again... Thank you for such a story, must go blow my nose... lol
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  • From ANON - Signy on June 01, 2005
    To the people who complained about Sephiroth being gay in this fic - Fuck off. There's nowhere in the game where it says Sephiroth was straight, and so people can draw their own conclusions as to his sexuality. I adore this fanfic even though I'm a Cloud/Aeris fan, so you shouldn't let your own bigotedness ruin what is a fantastic piece of writing.

    As to SiriusReborn, I can't say anything that hasn't already been said - your story is superb, your writing style is fluent and vivid, and I look forward to seeing more from you. You have a lot of talent. :)
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  • From ANON - Louiza on June 01, 2005
    You made me cry again, you wonderful, talented BASTARD. XD

    Seriously, you're awesome. This story is awesome. I'm just going to go sniffle in a corner, now. ^_~;
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  • From ANON - kinky lurker on June 01, 2005
    first of all, let me congratulate you for making me cry. this is an amazing piece of writing and i'm completely impressed with the way you handled it. you're control of the characters, of their emotions and drives was beautiful and very well in control. and i must say, i enjoyed this look into sephiroth's more innocent days. and i must say, as a cloud/sephiroth shipper, that was one of the most beautiful love stories between the two, even if it didn't end in a happily ever after. the fact that sephy wanted cloud to teach him to feel, the fact that sephy chose cloud... (tears) and then at the end... the poor men...

    let me say, you did a wonderful job exploring the characters, their lives, their interactions with one another and what it was that finally drove sephy over the edge.

    and finally, the last scene, the last little bit between cloud and sephy was so... so angst-filled and moving, it's hard to think of the words needed to describe it. i feel cloud's pain, with the loss of his lover, his friend, his home, his world. and i feel sephy's pain, realizing how much terrible shit has gone on in his own name, by his own body... and then to only awaken to feel your death as it comes rushing at you.

    i have tears in my eyes and it's not often that i cry. i applaud your work and i'm going to be reading it again, soon i think.

    thank you for sharing this with us, it really is an amazing piece of writing.

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - Emily on May 30, 2005
    T_T thats... just so...sad. i was still crying 20 minutes later. i wish it had a happy ending like Tainted Eyes. Are you making a CloudXSephiroth Sequal to that by the way?
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  • From ANON - Gelan on May 30, 2005
    Oh my god!! I just wanna cries.. I just pity Sephiroht.. I have always like him but now... I will never forgot him.. This story is just amazing. It just it. I love this.. Are going to compose something new?
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