Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Sick-cycle Carousel

By : Foley
  • From ANON - Sedge on February 17, 2004
    Sheesh, I was merely pointing that out, no need to bite my head off. I never said that the author should change anything. I was just saying that Pah (and Auda) look slightly different than the others, although the uniforms make it hard to tell.

    (http://wooshck.orh/pah.jpg) compared to (http://wooshck.org/zazi.jpg)


    Anyway, sorry if anyone saw anything negative in my previous comment (how that's possible, I don't know).
    Report Review

  • From ANON - RA on February 17, 2004
    First off, I want to say to the author, that the lame-excuse of a review "I'm pretty sure Pah's a girl" should have NO IMPACT whatsoever on your story. It's short, but nicely done. I only wish you'd take your time writing and place more detail with the characters. You describe scenery and the character's expressions well, you don't use redundant words and you are very clear with what you write.

    Secondly, in reply to the first "review" that you recieved... Pah doesn't have tits, hon. All the Guado Glories are MALE, i.e., not female. You can tell by looking at their bodies. Sure, the female guado don't have big tits like Lulu, but... they do have them and I don't see them on Pah. Secondly, it's a freakin' fanfic. So don't waste the author's time and excitement over a pitiful excuse of a review like that.

    Thank you for the time and I hopu cou continue writing this. ^^
    Report Review

  • From on February 16, 2004
    Uh.. I'm pretty sure Pah's female..
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!