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Reviews for The Thoughts of Kain

By : LostfallenAngel
  • From salarta on July 07, 2008
    You're probably not even around anymore to see this, but I liked your story a lot. I think it does a great job of showing what Kain saw in Rosa, and at the same time how Golbez's mental manipulations corrupted it into him viewing Rosa in ways she isn't and going too far.
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  • From ANON - KawaiiRanChan on September 02, 2006
    This is beautiful. I love it. The pure pleasure and torture of one of my favorite characters ever all in one. God... I wish I could write like this. Please, let's see some more inward thoughts of some angsty characters?
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  • From ANON - Timebound on December 09, 2005
    I like reading about Kain's time under Golbez's control. You have made him very in character. :)
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  • From ANON - mysticneko on August 02, 2005
    Wow. He's really evil... I seriously doubt that Rosa will do anything with him after hurting her so bad.
    Unless, Rosa does like him and wants him. Anyway, I really liked it. It makes me wonder if its the mind control
    or him really thinking that. Because in the game he really loved Rosa, so I wonder why he would hurt her...
    ^^' Sorry... I just writing my thoughts.
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  • From ANON - Kasota on July 30, 2004
    That was pretty cool. You should try writing this in third person and extending it. Hehe, i'd love to see what really become of it. But for how short it is, it's really good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - The Highwaywoman on March 25, 2004
    This is a very interesting piece of work even though its a little OOC for both Kain and Rosa. Like the other said, Kain may have been jealous of Cecil, but I serioulsy don't think he would hurt Rosa. As for Rosa herself, she's not the kind of woman who would manpulate and play men off against one another. Still, I like your story. You really should write a sequel; the sooner, the better.
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  • From ANON - RiikiTikiTavi on March 16, 2004
    Ah, glad someone did the "what happened while Kain had Rosa chained to the wall" fic! I can cross it off my to-do list now. I always thought there was an untold story there waiting for the right person. So glad you decided to tackle the topic!


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  • From ANON - Impressed on March 12, 2004
    I think this is an interesting piece of work even though I have to agree with Gabrielle that its a bit OOC. Its true that Kain was envious of the love between Cecil and Rosa and that he may have even been secretly jeleous of his friend, but controlled or not, I don't think he would ever consider harming Rosa. Anyway, great fic. Please update!
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  • From ANON - Curious on March 11, 2004
    This is good. Please continue; I hate to be left hanging! >_
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  • From ANON - Gabrielle on March 02, 2004
    This is very iteresting if a little out of character. You really must continue because I'm dying to know what happens next! ^_^
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