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Reviews for Convergence [1]: Broken

By : currie
  • From ANON - Zierra on April 25, 2004
    No, this doesn't suck at all. And no matter how much I'd liked to see Squall be tortured by Zell being mad at him a little while, I can't say that I dislike the turn of events. However, I think Squall's torture is far from over, at least through some perspectives. Can't complain about that either.
    And maybe Zell has forgotten all about their nightly activity in the morning, and thinks he's still mad at Squall. Well, that won't really work either.... Ah, never mind. I bet it'll be great whatever you decide should happen.

    Hugs, Z
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  • From ANON - juna on April 24, 2004
    Very nice update.
    I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - hopemia on April 22, 2004
    Damn that as good!!!! ^^

    I'm so hooked on this fic, I think I check AFF.net everyday.

    I'm glad that Squall and Zell made up... or at least, they did pretty much.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Tricia on April 20, 2004
    More great stuff. I love the Seifer/Squall interaction. Everyone is wonderfully in character. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Shivey on April 20, 2004
    Wow ... this just gets better and better. aww, poor zell. I know you probably have to work, sleep, eat and have a life ... but plssss update! This rocks!
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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 19, 2004
    Poor Zelly!!!

    Squall shoulda let him Seme... but, Squall is Squall.
    It's hard to say "no" to Seifer. Zell couldn't. Squall can't... yet.
    I feel sorry for Zell but, I don't know if I'm upset with Squall.

    PLease. more.
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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 19, 2004
    Awwww... damn that was hot!!!
    Seifer's just too damn hot for Squall to refused.
    Yu must work on Chapter 10... now!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Zierra on April 19, 2004
    Seriously, this was just damn perfect!
    I can't begint to tell you how sorry I feel for Zell, or how pissed off I am at both Seifer and Squall, but that happening - that little hope-you're-happy-now-you-asshole-thing from Zell - it was just fucking perfect!!!!!!!! Now, let Squall get tortured for a while, PLEASE, and let him feel the cold side of Zell for a while, and l wol worship you for all eternity! But I kinda shudder at all the credit Seifer´s getting...

    Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, but I've been reading them - thoroughly - and I love the whole story. And really sorry for cussing, I do that when I get excited...

    Hugs, Z
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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 14, 2004
    Damn fine story!!!!

    Seifer/Squall is soooo freakin' hot!!!!
    more!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - wing_zeto on April 14, 2004
    Amazing fic. I'm so glad you updated!

    Very, very hot story. I love it!
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  • From Regan on April 14, 2004
    *This is Schtiel from LJ* XD This chapter [8] was so hot, wonderfully written, and so sweet at the end. ^_^ Yay for Squall getting better. *g* Seifer said he'd do it. :D Can't wait for more. *smooch!*
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  • From ANON - Tricia on April 11, 2004
    Ack, this is good! Very imaginative threesome, though I'm now dying for Seifer and Squall to get it on. You write a hot Seifer. I normally don't like Zell, but I like him here. Great job. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - luna_light on April 11, 2004
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY,YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVE THREESOMES WITH SQUALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jessica-Lynn on April 11, 2004
    Oh ho ho! @.@ Stayed up really late to finish reading 1-7 and it was worth it. XD; Your writing is good, detailed, and worthy of lip-licking.
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  • From ANON - hopeness on April 10, 2004
    :::"I'm going to take care of you next," He purred, putting a great deal of concentration into steadying his voice, "Imagine ... just think about it, me slamming into you, stretching you so fucking wide... just like this.":::


    : groans and then dies from blood loss :

    Dear freakin' Hyne... that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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