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Reviews for Make Me Feel

By : writeright
  • From ANON - SilverwindFara on June 04, 2015
    Great story. Nice lemon.. Thanks for sharing
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  • From ANON - Dirge of the Angel on October 20, 2005
    Wow, for once in fanfiction Cloud is actually seme to someone besides Kadaj. Personally, I think that Cloud ends up being more in-character if he's on top of someone. I've always found it annoying when people see him as a poor, defenseless, immature teenager with an overly thin waist. For Christ's sake he's 21!

    ... Uh, ending the pointless ranting now... @_@

    This was pretty good, it wasn't dragged out for too long. Although I sorta think you made Vincent a little bit too angsty and uncaring than really is. I think he actually improved since he was introduced to the party. I mean, he is more open as the game goes on. He joked a couple of times, he actually laughed once and...
    Well there I go rambling again. Sorry.

    But really, it's not as bad as I'm making it seem. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tipama on June 04, 2005
    AWh! The Cloud/Vincent was good ^^ But I'm going to bounce over to he sequel and read the Cid/Vincent!! Yay for the two!


    Good story nonetheless!
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  • From ANON - Lengliorla on June 02, 2005
    This was great and just so you know I would have reviewed the first chapter too. But I'm new to this fandom and didn't read the first chapter untill now.
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  • From ANON - sephiroth lover on December 15, 2004
    i think this fic. (make me feel) is a good fic. but i don't see how anyone could hate cloud i mean whats your beef with him. besides he's pretty cute.
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  • From ANON - BetaServiceManager on December 15, 2004
    Bravo. Well enjoyed, dear.

    -Neptune
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  • From ANON - jemisard on November 10, 2004
    Well, I found the tense a little off putting at times, set in present rather than past, but I think it worked over all. Nicely smutty, though not a pairing I trraditionally read, and I like the end lines a lot. They tie up what he's going through pretty well, this search to feel something for more than a fleetingent.ent.

    You might want to run a spell check, I caught a couple of typos in the second chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sae on September 13, 2004
    This is actually of tof the best stories I've seen around here, probably only passed by it's sequel. Poor Vince. Oh well, at least he gets what he set out for, in the end.
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  • From ANON - Red on August 17, 2004
    This story is one of the better ones I've read, so rest assured, you do have talent. I look forward to seeing more from you. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lazy Hung Over Havi on May 01, 2004
    Great story! *pokes you for an update* Your lemon was really well written and descriptive, which is always good. *pokes again* I'm not a big Cloud fan, but I liked this. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Shi13 on April 27, 2004
    I'm very surprised no one reviewed cause..... this fic rocks and not reviewing doesn't make any sense -_- (though I souldn't be saying anything cause I almost never review) well I have to compliment you on your choice of pairing, Cloud/Vincent when Vincent actually likes Cid, very interesting. I find these kind of fics rare. Please write a sequel! Cid/Vincent rocks and most of the people on this site seem to favor Sephiroth/Cloud -_- which I tend to ignore because it doesn't include Vincent...... ok I'm starting to go off topic. Great story I loved the part where Vincent'se, we, well it could be worse and he thinks about Barret =P well I'm gonna end there. well, i hope you get more reviews so you can make a sequel ^_^
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