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By : Naniris
  • From ANON - Glinda Trisstt on July 02, 2004
    Very nice. I had no idea what FF8 was, but thanks for explaining. I like the way it is only from Seifer’s pov, leaving us to imagine what Zell is thinking. The interaction between the two is hot and sexually charged. I think they’ll get together again. ~_*

    I do have a couple of comments I hope you will find helpful. The section where you have Seifer literally rolling on the floor laughing seems very out of character for him the way he has been presented. Possibly you could have him sit down on the bed laughing. Still the same emotion, but he’s keeping in control and that’s seems important to him. Also at one point you use the word ‘uvula’, which you have of course used correctly, but it seems so clinical. You could use ‘the back of his throat’ or ‘the deepest recesses of his mouth’ ‘knocking at his tonsils’, something like that.

    I will definitely stop back to read more and see where these two go.

    Glinda

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  • From ANON - lena on July 01, 2004
    omg! you write so good! its how i picture sex would be between those two. ruff yet not....pain and lust....totaly awsome! it was funny, anymore humor would be over board. please you must write more! :)
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  • From ANON - Carrie on July 01, 2004
    Ooooo, why don't you put stuff like this on your LJ? This was GREAT!!!! Sadly, I haven't been keeping up with my SeZ obsession, since it has been replaced by Sirius/Remus, but... SQUEEE! I think you just may have brought it back!
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  • From ANON - rhapsodisiac on July 01, 2004
    OH MY GOD YES FIGHTINGSEX!
    This is why I love Seifer/Zell! Holy, hell, it was perfect! Totally IC, funny as hell while far from stupid and damn was that ever detailed-- detailed while not redundant, and hot and WOW.
    The best Seifer/Zel've 've ever read. Already dying for chapter two; hurry and post rev revive me.
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  • From ANON - EraoftheQuixotic on July 01, 2004
    Wonderful! Please write more, I want to know what was basically happening on Zell's side! And including Squall wouldn't be too bad. -wink wink hint hint nudge nudge-
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  • From ANON - Zierra on July 01, 2004
    Hell yes, I liked that! I mean, I'm a straight female, but that was pure entertainment! Favorite part? Eh, all of it? Well, I like it when Zell was giving Seifer head. The little one actually LOOKS good at doing it, doesn't he? The part with Cid and Seifer's weird turn-off fantasy, wasn't my favorite, but it was funny. Had me lifting a couple of eyebrows though, as why Seifer would even consider thinking about the Headmaster in that way.
    And if Zell was thinking of someone else? Well, he might have tried, but I think he failed. And the no kissing thing we'll be history... I bet Zell will take the initiative.
    Great story, and I'd love more updates!

    Hugs, Zierra
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  • From ANON - CP on July 01, 2004
    *hits herself* its the one from above......i didnt see that other people had reviewed, i thought i was the first, but can i still get a review? *gives the puppy dog look*
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on July 01, 2004
    oooo... that was yummy... please write more! you must!
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  • From ANON - Mi on July 01, 2004
    I loved this! SeiferxZell is my favorite FF8 pairing, so I'm always glad to find a fic with them.
    I'm not wha what my favorite part was, it was all quite enjoyable. I did like Zell being carted off by Seifer from the cafeteria. That was priceless.

    there's more to c rig right? *hopes*

    lovelove,
    mi


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