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Reviews for Resurrection

By : ZombieDuke
  • From YoukaiObsessed on April 20, 2005
    Wow!! I just love this story!!! I went from being very amused and laughing.. To ohh lucky ass Cloud.. having those 3..0,0‘(ohh) Then back to being amused.. then back to the other…Great job!! TY for the great story.. !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - unknown on April 19, 2005
    Yes! More Ressurection! Zack and Sephiroth can't keep out of Cloud's pants XD And I'm now interested in the plot, keep on going!
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  • From on April 19, 2005
    Yes! I'm glad this update finally came! It was great byy the way. What was thhat vision with the four kids about though? I like how Cloud can only see Aeris, it's kind of funny when she's trying to help. Well I hope the next one comes a bit sooner. Thanks again!
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  • From Tamura on April 18, 2005
    that was fucking hilarious. i loved how zack and sephy kept pouncing on each other. cloud seems to be the only thing that can make them not kill each other. though they still attempt.
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  • From Tamura on April 18, 2005
    i love this story. it's very well done and well thought out. *smirks* it appears that cloud has some problems at hand
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  • From ANON - Riyoko on April 16, 2005
    Yay you updated! and no why did you stop there!?! I want to read more. *Cires* Anyways man it was getting interesting, I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon ^_^ Great job! An the four children...is Cloud going to have four kids!? O_O Okay hah I am going way out of porportion on this. Well then keep the story going ya? Till next chapter!
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  • From ANON - SquallxCloud on March 17, 2005
    Uh...this was different.
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  • From ANON - Birdie on March 10, 2005
    Yay! You've updated!! A very good chapter, despite the fact everyone seemed to be on a sugar high -- still, I like it, so keep writing and have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - unknown on March 01, 2005
    I finally gathered enough courage to read this one. I'm usually unhappy when I hear of anything relating to children of the main characters. And I kept on getting disturbed by the thoughts of Cloud having a uterus everytime somebody brings up his pregnancy XD But I'm really glad I decided to read and it did make my day. Absolutely love the 8th chapter. "WHY AREN'T YOU FUCKING DYING!?" XD Chapter 9 had me throwing giggle fits.

    I ... kinda forgot to keep track or the small errors I usually place in Notepad, so I went through and skimmed it again, so I might have missed a few errors.

    CH1 "C swe sweetie" (14th paragraph)
    CH3 "Cloud's pret."
    t." (Towards the end of the chapter)
    CH6 JEHOVA (2nd paragraph of the fourth section [according to the divider ~~~].)
    CH6 He moved suddenly, grabbing d’s d’s wrists (2nd to last paragraph at the end)
    CH7 Cloud turned his head to the side, blushing darkly. “H-he held my hands down and-and-”

    “Fuck you?” Sephiroth offered. (I think the first line should start a new paragraph. I also think that "Fuck you" should be "Fucked you." Don't quote me because I'm not an expert word use of 'fuck' >_>)

    I'm looking forward to the next update :D
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  • From ANON - Yersi Fanel on February 02, 2005
    Yeah!! I like your fic, it's cool, yeah, keep going, keep going!!!
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  • From ANON - Sephiroth\'s Killer on January 30, 2005
    Please update soon. *teary eyed*
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  • From ANON - Shalina on January 20, 2005
    THat was good cant say i would ever see Sephiroth saying thring like Sweetie and babe but hey its still good. Love the writing it flows nicely which is a pleasant change from most people.
    Liked it very much and i dont usually like male pregnancy fic's
    Keep up the very good work and please update soon i really wanna know what happens
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  • From on January 19, 2005
    Hey I'm glad you updated! Dun care if it's short, glad to have known what had happened next, but also can't wait for the next one! ^_^

    Regarding the typo, I looked all over and finally found it. It was in this sentence: "Did he saw anything to you? Ask you anything?" Nanaki questioned a starring at the floor in thought.

    Took me a while but I finally found it x.x; Other than that, I noticed no mistakes, looked flawless to me. Please continue writing, can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kk on January 19, 2005
    MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

    alright, i usually stay far away from the male pregnancy ones, but this fic had me hooked!! XD i love this cloud uke! thanks dude! hope to see more soon?




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  • From ANON - Kupo on January 19, 2005
    Yay new chappie!Whoot! anyway i liked it. And we were so close to a threesome! update asap!
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