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Reviews for Be my Master

By : vivilover69
  • From ANON - Ribbon on February 23, 2007
    Gods that was hot. I'm looking forward to seeing another chapter of this..soon hopefully.
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on February 04, 2007
    Shouldn't that tagline have been "Cum again soon."? That was the hottest mix of sex and violence that I've ever read!
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  • From ANON - Sekre on January 27, 2007
    Yay, glad you updated. It was a yummy lemon.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on November 12, 2006
    Wow...that was really hot! Really, REALLY hot...if there's anymore, I would LOVE to read it. hehehe

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  • From ANON - Sonya on November 06, 2005
    Loved it!! This chapter was the best so far.
    And this angsty ending surprised me ^^ i really liked it.
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  • From ANON - jingko on October 15, 2005
    love the chapters so far, when does #5 come out?
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  • From ANON - Dray C. Morgan on March 20, 2005
    hey when are you going to put a new chapter on this story I love it. but I don't want to see it end with just that. Hey email me sometime okay niki
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  • From ANON - dray on January 20, 2005
    wow I really hope that you continue with this story I just hope that you have the characters do more than just kiss though because then it would kind of go off from wherre it we were getting the image from where it was going. Try pictures
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  • From ANON - nightsister_mighella on January 05, 2005
    wow... just wow. I really like this strory, cause there's nothing hotter than an arrogant Sephiroth. I hope (REALLY hope) you'll continue this story as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Yersi Fanel on December 15, 2004
    My my...Continue!
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  • From ANON - Aura on December 11, 2004
    You have done a great job developing the characters. They seem to act and talk like they should, plus you have created a wonderful atmosphere. I was very delighted of the scene with Cloud, Sephiroth and masamune. It was so refressingly new. So please: write some more! This is actually one of the best Cloud/Zax/Seph -fics I have read, and I need more.

    PS. Have you ever listened to a band called Kosheen? To me it worked as great background music.
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  • From ANON - Ashah on October 16, 2004
    Ooooo........I am really enjoying this so far.

    The rather stimulating "sword-play"......YES.
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  • From ANON - CrystallineTears on October 15, 2004
    I love lemons as much as the next uber otaku fangirl, but I really don't read this fanfic for the fact that it'll be a lemon. I readt it because the plot is wonderful. As always, I loved this chapter and hope that you write the next soon. As always, if you don't I'll sic Vin on ya.
    ........though, it may take longer then I thought for him to walk.....or even limp.....
    I just won Seph from a poker game.....and well......2 of my fav bishys + me telling them what to do = one of them neveingeing able to walk again because of all the hot lovin.

    SephirothXVincent.......Proof that sometimes incest is ok.

    Until next time,
    ~Steph~
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  • From ANON - FluffyVampire on October 13, 2004
    @________@ Seph and Cloud showering. Yummy! X3Evil cliffhangers! Please! Write more! More is needed! I can't get the grin off of my faceXD Not to mention the scene with Cloud 'kissing' the blade. Yum^_^
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  • From ANON - CrystallineTears on October 12, 2004
    Y-YOU WROTE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!
    *Glomps/huggles/strangles from all the love she's giving the author*
    *happy beyond all reasoning*
    I'm so glad you wrote more!!!!
    I LOVE the seccong chapter adn how Sephy-sama is!! And the 3rd is wonderful too!! I love Zacky adn Sephy and Cloudy adn even your char!! and I loved the 1st chapter....but I already reviwed that one....
    BUT YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!! CAUSE YOUR THE BESTEST AUTHOR EVER!!!!
    *still jumping up and down adn squeeling like a schoolgirl despite the fact she's 17 and wouldn't be caught dead doing that*
    If you continue to write, I'll continue to be honored to read it!!
    *huggles and runs off, turns as he runs and yells back*
    Thanks again!!!
    *runs into a post*
    @_@ oowww.....
    *shakes it off and runs off*

    ~Steph~
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