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Reviews for Cops can't be trusted

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - Megami_Layla on January 19, 2005
    Oooo...Nice! VERY nice! I hope you do a sequel, but this time perhaps with just Seifer and Squall, and some side stories with other parings. ^_^ You can make nice long hot...steamy..chapters...ahem! ^__^ *gives you a cookie and FFVIII plushies* Congradulations on finishing!
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  • From Siarra on January 14, 2005
    I can't believe you were nervous about this. This is what the art of mindless pwp is all about.
    It turned out wonderfully and even more so because Zell must've been a real pain in the posterioir parts of the anatomy to write.
    It wouldn't hurt if you, now that the hard part is over, went over and edited the chapters for those unfortunate spelling mistakes and other little thigies and fine tuned this baby into perfection.
    And now, if you'll excuse me, I'll go and take a Very cold shower...
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  • From ANON - darkangel_1210 on January 14, 2005
    Gimme the next chapter NOW! I mean it I'm going crazy I don't care how many reviews you have; for the sake of my sanity post the next chapter!!!


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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on January 13, 2005
    That was gooooooooood. Really good.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 12, 2005
    WOOOT! this was sooo hot! *bows down before your greatness* thank you so much for writing this. i absolutely loved it. looking foward to seeing and reading more works by you. so until then, later! ^____^

    Devious Lil Devil
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  • From writeright on January 12, 2005
    Whee, more Squall abuse. Now I'm seriously tempted to increase the cruelty factor the next time I get around to writing Seifer/Squall sex. *Ignores the voice in the back of her mind pointing out she has a rape fic to finish one of these days* This was very good, very hot, and I really enjoyed every chapter. Hell, I reviewed every chapter.

    CP the, umm, distracted
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 12, 2005
    whoa..........*blinks a couple of times then wipes the blood from her nose* sugoi............. that was sooo goood. there were a few typos here and there but the greatness of the smut would totally make the reader overlook them. if you ever needed a beta please look me up! i'd be happy to help. oh and my choice is for irvine and zell. *get a dazed look on her face from thinking about zelly and squally getting hot and heavy then shakes it off* but... um ... yeah. lovely work. i cant wait to read more! so unil next time, ja!
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  • From ANON - s and s blah on January 12, 2005
    I would really like it if you put irvine and Rajin in there not to crazy about zell taking someone he seems like the kind to take it instead of giving any way great story

    thanks for the entertainement
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  • From ANON - dee on January 12, 2005
    great! great! oooh....irvine and zell! yah...that'd be hot.....a gangbang Squall uke.....hehehe.....can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - dragonclaw21974 on January 12, 2005
    More soon please, and I would vote fore Irvine and Zell.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2005
    too hot to imagine. the next pairing should be zell and irvine. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Switch on January 11, 2005
    I think this story is awesome! Very well put! First time I've ever seen Seifer described so.....Seirfer-like! Anyway, I think the two shadows should be Irvine and Zell! Raijin kinda bugs me..... with his 'ya knows' ya know! AHHH!!!! It's spreading like a disease ya know!!!! AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! End the rage now!
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  • From ANON - hieichan on January 11, 2005
    definitely well written and entertaining, i love the bad cop attitude, poor squall, whom i don't like that much so serves him right
    i vote zell !!!! i vote zell !!!!!!
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  • From writeright on January 11, 2005
    Typos are still bad, but at least not as bad as last time...and I vote for Irvine/Zell to appear in the next chapter. Squall abuse is a lot of fun to read and write, so keep torturing my favorite bishie. ^_^ The sex was good to read and your Seifer is fun.

    CP the weird
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  • From Siarra on January 11, 2005
    I'm back and I'm endlessly glad to see that you're back, too. *smirks* The text keeps getting hotter and better.
    There were quite a few misspellings but I don't know if anyone has ever managed to completely get rid of the buggers.

    I can see your problem... Well, I'm glad that Irvine is included either way, we all want to see that cowboy do some riding. As for the other... Hmm. I'd say Raijin. Because I simply find that Zell doesn't have the characteristics for something like that, especially with Seifer. I can't even see him being the top outside of a warm and trusting relationship. I have my prejudices. Now Raijin, then... He's big, he looks threatening, and when we remeber his history in the game as a member of the Disciplinary Committee... *grins* Okay, We all know he isn't so bad but it's just a step commpared to the mindless leap it would take to do it with Zell.

    But remember, these are just my opinions.
    Keep going strong!
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