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Reviews for Cops can't be trusted

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - SxS lover on January 11, 2005
    Zell and Irvine but I kind of wanted it to be just only Seifer and Squall. Love the smutty fic
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on January 11, 2005
    great. I think it should be Irvine and Raijin becasue Zell is too nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope this help you towards your 6 more reviews target.
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  • From ANON - s and s blah on January 10, 2005
    to lazy ot log in.

    that was really nice start.

    hopeful you will keep writing maybe put quistis and irvine in it together,

    i just love quis and irvy just as much as i love squall and seifer and thats a whole lot

    any way keep writing please


    thanks for the entertianment
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  • From ANON - yukihime on January 10, 2005
    that was quite a good story especially if what you said about it being your second lemon! good job :)
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  • From ANON - lo on January 09, 2005
    Nice job. That was really intense. I liked it. I hope to see more from you. keep up the good work.
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  • From Siarra on January 09, 2005
    You can be pretty damn proud of yourself after writing that.
    Usually when I read dirty talk it just makes me giggle but that was hot...

    There was quite a few spelling mistakes but nothing that would cause the world to end.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter, let's just hope that poor Squall doesn't get any permanent injuries... Just something that makes me wonder... Why does everyone always write Seifer to have this huge monstrosity of a cock?
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on January 09, 2005
    I want another chapter. This was great. ^-^
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  • From ANON - rei on January 09, 2005
    heres a review. now onto chapter 2! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2005
    Very porn-ish. I wonder if you're a guy. But yeah, it was hot, so keep going!
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  • From ANON - Delta immortal on January 08, 2005
    ... I read it. All of it. And i enjoyed it. >:) Please write more. (What else can I really say?)
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  • From writeright on January 08, 2005
    Aside from the massive number of typos found in there, it wasn't too bad...although AU's really aren't my thing and I just read it because it's Seifer/Squall smut. The sex was good and your Seifer was enough of a bastard to be believeable, though it's easier to picture him being the one to ride a motorcycle and drive entire too fast than to imagine Squall doing it.

    CP the voiceless
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2005
    Great story. Haven't read one like that yet. Nice job.
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