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Reviews for Fortune Foretold

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  • From ANON - AJTalon on May 26, 2005
    C'mon, c'mon... This was just getting good! From a plot perspective, that is. Don't stop now! Go go go!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2005
    GAAA! You HAVE to update soon im dying here....the pain of waiting is to much!!!!
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  • From ANON - avalon21 on May 12, 2005
    excellent start. I can't wait till it really gets started ;)

    A comment, though; you might want to change some of the things Cloud says to himself (particularly in the first few chapters) to thoughts instead of having him say them out loud. As it is, it seems a little weird with Cloud walking around seemingly talking to himself. All in all, though, very well done, and I hope the chapters to come are just as good.

    Kudos to going with Aeris/Cloud. There's not enough fics of that pairing here. Keep writing!

    -avalon21
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  • From ANON - Clorith on April 16, 2005
    Great story so far. But why on Earth did you make Cloud and Tifa hook up (even if only temporarily)?! *wails* You did say it's supposed to be a CloudxAerith fic after all, why spoil the fun. *pouts*
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  • From ANON - Timebound on March 29, 2005
    *squeal* IT'S A CLOUD/AERITH FIC!!!!!

    *dances around happily*


    You have a wonderful style here, and I can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - Dragona on March 20, 2005
    Continue on. Its been awhile since I've seen Cloud/Aeris, since I've been very busy and all.. Please finish Chapter 4 as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - vivilover69 on March 03, 2005
    cool ^^

    vvl 69
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  • From Zelix on March 03, 2005
    Hmm, Very interesting piece of fiction you have here, keep updating... i'm game. Meaning i'm ready for more with great interest.
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  • From ANON - Clorith on March 03, 2005
    Hi! This story's going great so far. Update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - anonymus on February 21, 2005
    Sounds good so far. I really like these kind of pwp (porn with plot). Aeris and Cloud are definitely my favourite pair in FF7.
    Hope to read more (soon).
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  • From ANON - exty on February 18, 2005
    please continue the story, i can't wait to see cloud&aeris together ...!
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