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  • From ANON - Brittny on May 23, 2005
    By the way...that was fucking hot!
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  • From ANON - Brittny on May 23, 2005
    *dances* Yay! You updated!
    0_0...I wonder what is going to happen now?
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 23, 2005
    fuck good !!

    for once it's making love and not hard sex. and it was as hot !!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2005
    Okay, if Squall whines or behaves like a cat one more time I'm going to have to carve my eyes out. He is human, right? You're a good writer, but remember that he's supposed to be a human male. So many yaoi writers want to make characters like him and Aya from WK turn into either girls or giant kittens.
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  • From ANON - Brittny on May 22, 2005
    *DOOOOM!* Update! *Summons Eden*
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  • From ANON - L\' Ange Hantent on May 21, 2005
    I absolutly love this! For some reason I find Squall so cute and adorable like this...even when insane Squall's cute! lol Poor Seifer he must feel like a pedafile (SP?)! And Squall being naughty like that! ohhh. I love it keep going, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on May 21, 2005
    Evil, evil. you said it yourself. You HAVE to update soon. Fantastic chapter.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 21, 2005
    if he make long sweet love .... maybe Squall will be scared if it was painless
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  • From on May 21, 2005
    I think he should so make Squall scream in pleasure. But not yet, not until he's all better. xDD. Please write more soon. I like this story a lot.
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  • From ANON - Yoshimi on May 12, 2005
    YES!! Another wonderful chapter!! I love them so far, But just as sure as seifer is worn out so am I. I couldn't emagine taking care of squall like that!! Hyne!! I probably would be the one having the nervous break down!! on these chapters I feel that they do flow with the story. i think some times it's good to decrease the speed of the story at some point it kindof helped me better understand seifer abit more. All in all I really loved the chapters!! can't wait for you to update them!! I did however skip one or two classes reading this so please forgive me^^. I love good stories ^_^!!
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on May 12, 2005
    Shiva loves to tease Seifer, hehe. Please update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on May 11, 2005
    Great chapter. If you decide to add more GFs don't go over board as that would just ruin them. This is a really good story and the need to know what's going to happen just keeps bringing me right back for every new chapter. The nice thing is that i don't forget what has happened in previsou chapters eithe rso i can keep track of the story without having to skim read the whole thing

    well toodles Noodles

    Honey Nut Loop
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  • From ANON - lynn on May 11, 2005
    hi, i loved the chapter, but i read you're authors note about losing speed....and here is my attempt at being helpful. You could always skip a couple of the ten days and remark that there has been little change or improvement, since it feels like something more will happen once they reach the village. or, if you don't want to skip days, the conversations between seifer and squall where squall kinda talks about what happened to him makes it feel like you are getting somewhere. those are the only things i could think of if you want to "speed" things up and i'm not even sure they would work, so good luck
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on May 08, 2005
    Poor Squall he's seems like he's getting more confused...and Shiva won't tell Seifer anything is she waiting for Squall to? nah please update soon!
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 07, 2005
    more more please oooh more !! and maybe I dunno ... ifirt could be back by any mysterious way ?
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