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Reviews for Lovers Trust

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on May 06, 2005
    Hiya me again. Another great chapter. Sorry i didn't review the laat chapter but my brother took the interenet modem whilst i was reading it and so i had no internet connection to review with if you get me. Anyway both chapters were fabbityfab. Shiva's a nice touch. I want her to tell Seifer at some point. At least i think i want her too. Ah the suspense.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 04, 2005
    it's a quite hard to read fics, the feeling expalin there .... damn this is really a good fics, and I ant to be Shiva to be able to help Seifer in a way.
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  • From ANON - Yoshimi on May 04, 2005
    No I didn't get into any trouble ^_^ but I'd do it again just to read alot more of your work. Yes I loved this one like all the other ones especially now that I know more about what is happening to Squally! I really love these parings and I hope you write more wonderful work like this.
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  • From writeright on May 03, 2005
    Loved Shiva, loved Seifer showing how nice he can be for the right person, wanted more smut. And I saw a couple small mistakes I didn't fix my first time looking through the fic. @_@ Oh well, I guess nobody's perfect. Keep up the work, we all wanna see a good ending.

    CP the hungry
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  • From ANON - MusikVibe on May 03, 2005
    I love this story. You have a wonderful talent for storytelling. I'm anxious to see what turns out in the end. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - yaoi lover on April 28, 2005
    Ha ha ha.....I printed this story out and read it in my Religion class. *gets struck by lightning*
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  • From ANON - Brittny J. on April 28, 2005
    This is a great fic! I love the plot. I also love the gentle side of Seifer. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Yoshimi on April 28, 2005
    I really loved the entire thing! I usually don't review until the end of the story so sorry if you felt like some of the readers didn't care but I do. I think your writing is wonderful! I truley commend you for this type of story to me it's rare and also very hard to portray Squall like this (believe me I have tried and have failed). I really would like to know what happends next. i'm soo interested in it that I skipped school just to finish chapter 9 so please don't leave a fan in suspense!
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on April 24, 2005
    I think this was a fantablous chapter. I loved the bizarre master twist. Made me thirst to find out the reasons behind Squall's predicament.
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  • From writeright on April 24, 2005
    Seifer: Wait, who says I don't wanna be Squall's Master? I know a few people who say I do....

    Yeah, crazy muse. Well, I liked that chapter and I hope for more soon. I can beta for the majority of your spelling and grammar mistakes, but even I'm not perfect. Hell, that's why I have a beta. I'm a nitpicky brat like that.

    Seifer: There gonna be more sex anytime soon? CP's not letting me play with Squall for some reason.

    CP the crazy
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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on April 20, 2005
    I like plot twists. And you're right, no-one gets better in a hospital. Perhaps the Shumi will know what's really wrong with Squall? Good stuff.
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  • From writeright on April 19, 2005
    Whee, a change for the better. Seifer and Squall need each other, can't anyone else see that? I can definitely see Seifer breaking Squall out of anywhere he gets himself stuck. Can also see Squall doing the same for Seifer, but there seems to be an increase in unstable Squall fics lately. Anyways, good chapter, nice plot. Too many little issues to point out (get another beta, maybe), but otherwise keep up the good work.

    CP the voiceless
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on April 19, 2005
    i think...that this was anothere fab chapter and that Squall's POV was really efective.
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  • From ANON - lynn on April 19, 2005
    yes, i also really like the whole escape from the hospital thing, especially from that bitchy doctor. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - NekoMalik on April 18, 2005
    Quite possibly one of the best FF8 fics I have ever read. Good story, well thought out and well written! Exceedingly original too, which I like. Definately not your usual S/S story.

    Only thing I can fault you on are the occasional spelling and grammar mistakes, though they are few and far between, and I'm just as bad when I write.

    Look forward to the next chapter!
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