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Reviews for Lovers Trust

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on March 01, 2005
    Lol. If i strangled you i wouldn't be able to find out what was going to happen. Great chapter I'm soooooo glad you updated. Well til next time.
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  • From ANON - lo on March 01, 2005
    This is well thought out. I can't wait to see if squall can be helped. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - lynn on February 28, 2005
    i know you said you want to end this soon, but i am still really enjoying it. I'm not that great and suggestions or criticism, so i'm just excited to see where you take it next
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  • From writeright on February 28, 2005
    SMUT!! *Glomps* Yeah, I wanna know what Squall's thinking, but I'm glad you're taking this one little bit at a time and leaving us all wondering. And believe me, you're not taking a while to update. Some people go months between chapters.

    CP the lazy
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  • From ANON - kk on February 28, 2005
    plot twist! *agonizing* what's squall thinking?? ahhhhh!!

    thanks! that's a weird converstation b/t laguna and company... imagine telling your friend's dad that you set him up with a guy...
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  • From ANON - Kiana on February 26, 2005
    **PLEASE CONTINUE**. It held my attention and was pretty easy to read besides some minor errors. I love the plot, and you should put up another chapter SOON.
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  • From writeright on February 25, 2005
    No sex, but still a good chapter because it let us all see that Seifer really does care about Squall and that he's genuinely concerned about him. Write more, please?

    CP the cheerful
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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on February 24, 2005
    I really like this story - smut AND plot. Keep going. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on February 23, 2005
    well it held my attention. I thought it was great. Just a few spelling/grammatical errors. I love all your storie sand think you are a great writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. This really is great. Seifer and squall all the way. They are by far the best couple and lucky for me, you seem to agree. :P
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  • From ANON - lo on February 22, 2005
    I really like how the story is developing. I think it will help if you re-read your story and have someone else proof read it. Some of your tenses do not flow. Keep up the good work.
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  • From writeright on February 20, 2005
    I dunno about anyone else, but I'm really liking this since your Seifer actually seems to care about Squall, unlike some other stories I've read. Please, please continue and it might help my muses come back faster than they already are.

    CP the miserable
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  • From ANON - lynn on February 19, 2005
    I really do like it and i definatly think its worth continuing. I like your Seifer as well, so don't worry.
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  • From ANON - hopemia on February 19, 2005
    Ahhh.. I do love sweet and sappy Seifer... I believe Seifer would be dominate, posessive, and loving.. all in one!

    More!
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on February 18, 2005
    yes it is worth continuing. No it is not bad. Just a different style. This is fine, really good. Problems only start to rise when seifer gets too soft in a story but i think you capture him perfectly.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 18, 2005

    I like the concept of the stroy. Don't worry you did not get sappy, I've seen digustingly sappy stuff, you were in the clear. There was more than just sex, it was also a breaking of destructive mental barriers and Seifer was patient enough to try and help Squall, I like that.
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