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Reviews for Hurt

By : darksquall
  • From ANON - J on May 03, 2005
    Well done Girly.

    We're liking this, except you're awfully mean to poor little Squall. :)
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  • From ANON - lynn on May 03, 2005
    I loooovvved the chapter. It had the right amount of playful banter and real emtional parts. i liked the humour that helped keep it from being completely dark as well (especially when seifer had to help lift squall's arm so he could flick him off)I was worried you weren't coming back, but i don't mind the wait as long as you eventually update.
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  • From ANON - Race Ulfson on May 03, 2005
    Mmm, it was well worth the wait, you know that. One of the things I loved was "fine". It's so Squall, such a masking, pseudo-polite term and once he'd decided he was "fine" an act of Hyne wasn't going to make him change his tune. I love that Squall is all vulnerable and needy but not pathetic and clingy. I love that Seifer has the upperhand... and is still utterly at Squall's mercy.
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  • From ANON - Vadluvy on April 30, 2005
    I really enjoy this story it goes through all of the motions of their healing process almost as if they are real people. This is A truely excellent story and I would really like to read more of it in the future.
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  • From ANON - Race Ulfson on April 03, 2005
    You know I love and adore this fic. I love their give and take, and how each man is the other's greatest weakness. My favorite part so far is Seifer blushing: it's both so in character and unusual, I can see why Squall was amazed.
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on April 02, 2005
    Great story still. love it.
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  • From ANON - ferret on March 22, 2005
    Ooh, fantastic... I am also a huge fan of Race's Hero arc, so this is great... almost like a fanfic of a fanfic :) But I love the direction you've taken it and I can really tell you've made it your own, put a lot of thought into it. I'm totally absorbed and can't wait to see what happens next. Great work!
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on March 21, 2005
    Ah, good. Another chapter up. This should hold all of following this wonderful story for a little while. Please sit your butt down at the keyboard and start typing the next installment. You're doing a great job. keep it up.

    P.S. Thanks for the good review of my on-going Push It fic.
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  • From ANON - MoOdSwInG on March 21, 2005
    First, I need to let you know Seifer/Squall is definatly not my favorite pairing, maybe because there is too
    many of them... really, I dunno why, but I decided to give this fic a chance because i've read some of your
    other works and I can definetly say your one hell of an author. Well in the end i'm pretty happy I decided
    to give this a chance because its by far one of the best Seifer/Squall fic i've had the pleasure to come upon.
    Your work is everything a great fiction should be! The interactions between the caracters and the feelings
    expressed are just too precious. This story is sad and full of angst but it still give a us a feeling of peace
    as to their feelings towards one another. I really adore the way your writing this, the fact the they talk to
    each other is just perfect it help us understand exactly whats happening between them at this point in time.
    (am I making sense? I doubt it.) I really do hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews.
    Remember this, fanfiction readers are mostly ungrateful bastards and bitches. (Yes, readers, this means
    I want you to prove me wrong!!!) Anyways. I don't have enough praises for this story and my sleepy mind
    is telling me I should keep some for later.

    Thank you very much for this beautiful artwork,

    -MoOdSWInG

    P.S. BTW, i'm french and writing this at 4am, cuz i've read the 4 chs up in one go and coudn't let myself stop, so
    this attempt to review might be a bit messed up cuz the fonction in my brain used for translation from french to
    english decided to go to bed around 10pm. (ok, humor fonction asleep too -_-;;;;;) I'm sorry for that, promise
    to do better later.
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  • From ANON - ren on March 21, 2005
    hope it works out for them... it's great so far!
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  • From writeright on March 20, 2005
    Very nice, detailed, emotional chapter. You're a great author and I love reading this story, even if your Seifer is sometimes just a little too nice for my liking. Keep it up, this is one time where I don't care how long it takes to get to the smuttiness.

    CP the angsty
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  • From ANON - kk on March 18, 2005
    can't wait! when seifer finds out just how messed up squall is .... they're very cute together.
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on March 16, 2005
    Great fic. Squall with emotions is always good in my books and seeing him as screwed up as you've got him is very refreshing. I also like the fact that Seifer is showing he cares for Squall. I really hope you'll continue with this storyline.
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  • From ANON - Kumori on March 10, 2005
    Hey i love this story i hope you write more chapters
    :P anyways see ya
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  • From writeright on March 10, 2005
    I've said it before and I'll say it again - I LOVE your characters. This fic has brought me almost to the point of tears more than once because of the emotion I can feel and the tension that's there between Seifer and Squall. It'll be a while before it goes away, I think, but it'll definitely be worth it when it does. Gods, I wish I could write like that.

    You know, I've been trying to offer constructive criticism lately in my reviews, but I just can't think of anything that I didn't like about that chapter.

    CP the emotional
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